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Name: vigal (Signed) · Date: 05/24/05 22:54 · For: Harry “Trouble” Potter
OMG! I have followed from the start.... Wow... hagrad have harry a detention?! I am also glad to see harry back to normal.... although the chapter when HE attacked freaked me out.... can't wait to see where your going....

Author's Response: Sadly, I'm only going to the end of the first week. Just giving some closure, showing things returning to normal. To see where I truly go, look for the sequel, already in progress, which starts around Christmas of the same year.

Name: ink_heart (Signed) · Date: 05/24/05 18:45 · For: Harry “Trouble” Potter
When are you going to update? I hope I don't sound rude or annoying if I do tell me!

Name: ArrabellaWeasley (Signed) · Date: 05/23/05 11:46 · For: Harry “Trouble” Potter
uh oh.. saturday morning detention does NOT sound like fun... oh well. at least he's not like 3 anymore.. good job with the chapter. update really sooN!

Name: hp_fan (Signed) · Date: 05/22/05 15:22 · For: Harry “Trouble” Potter
great story!!!!! update really soon plz

Name: ink_heart (Signed) · Date: 05/21/05 22:21 · For: Harry “Trouble” Potter
I liked this chapter! Keep up the good work! And update soon!

Name: phoenix_trills (Signed) · Date: 05/20/05 17:44 · For: Harry “Trouble” Potter
this is an awesome story! update soon, please!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you for reviewing.

Name: phoenix_trills (Signed) · Date: 05/20/05 17:43 · For: What Next?
YAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!! HE MADE IT!!!!!!! thank you very much for not letting us suffer any longer!! lol

Name: phoenix_trills (Signed) · Date: 05/20/05 16:43 · For: Faking Sick
Well, i most certainly hope its A!! Harry has got to go back to Hogwarts! This is torturing Harry! It's torturing me, too, come to think of it! AAAAAA!!!

Name: dolphinchick114 (Signed) · Date: 05/20/05 16:10 · For: Harry “Trouble” Potter
i really like the entire story!! i thought the lesson would be more complicated but it was so simple, that i should have caught on days ago! BTW why did snape bother harry about his potion but leave malfoy alone? he really is a meanie isn't he? good story, keep writing, i wanna read more!!!

Author's Response: Snape's always done stuff like that. It is actually written in book five, when Snape banishes Harry's potion because he forgot one tiny thing, though his potion still looked okay. Meanwhile, Crabbe's, I think, was an utter mess, yet Harry got the zero, Crabbe at least got some points. Then there was when Snape smashed Harry's sample and gave him a zero.

Name: nimue (Signed) · Date: 05/20/05 9:12 · For: Harry “Trouble” Potter
Snape is an old git isn't he?! Glad to hear that you are doing a sequel as this is one of the best stories I've ever read on here.

Author's Response: Thank you. I never imagined I would be "one of the best" when I started this. Thank you, very much.

Name: dolphinchick114 (Signed) · Date: 05/19/05 21:41 · For: Faking Sick
oh my gosh! thats so cruel!! its good that harry's been to the quidditch cup already or he would never know what he was missing!! but i think it should be A because he HAS to stay in his year. and if its c, then all hell will break lose with voldemort and stuff, but then he would be way ahead, but have a chance to redo all of his classes! but he HAS to go back this year, so definately A, but he should be cutting it really close, like the night before the train to hogwarts.

Name: ink_heart (Signed) · Date: 05/18/05 16:04 · For: What Next?
Is this the end of the story?

Author's Response: I did already answer this, but since you asked twice. NO! I will type "THE END" at the end of the last chapter. This is the last time I will answer for anybody.

Name: ink_heart (Signed) · Date: 05/18/05 16:04 · For: What Next?
Is this the end of the story?

Name: DeerKillerBeemer (Signed) · Date: 05/18/05 6:29 · For: What Next?
SWEET! Harry's back at Hogwarts *does happy dance*! yay! Okay, I love this chapter--it's awesome! Keep up the good work...hopefully you'll still continue the story even though Harry is back to his normal self. ;)

Author's Response: The story will continue for a bt still, I think to chapter 25. And since Honeydude already ruined the secret, there will be a sequel. The sequel will focus on something Harry learned over the last five chapters of this story.

Name: Hermiones_Heartache (Signed) · Date: 05/17/05 18:49 · For: Hogwarts Letters
I am soooooooooo sorry- the reviews by Hermiones_Secrets were actually mine- somehow it ended up under her name.

Author's Response: Don't worry about it. I'm just glad you like my story and are willing to review. Thank you for all your praise and feedback.

Name: Hermiones_Secrets (Signed) · Date: 05/17/05 18:45 · For: Hogwarts Letters
That was a nice chapter, explaining a lot. It shows how much more child-like Harry is becoming. Also, I've got a question. Where is Mr. Weasley? He couldn't possibly be at work day and night? Is he dead? Just wondering. Good chapter 9/10. (Don't worry, I hardly ever give tens- even a nine is extremely rare for me.)

Name: Hermiones_Heartache (Signed) · Date: 05/17/05 18:34 · For: Slipping, Sliding, Falling Backward
Oh yeah, one more thing. Was Harry really reffering to Mrs. Weasley as "Mommy?" Or did he mean his own mother? Just wondering.

Author's Response: You have to focus on his frame of mind. He woke up scared, and thought he was alone. Any five-year-old would ask for a maternal figure. He just wanted comfort. And Mrs. Weasley was fulfilling the job of a mother. So, he did mean her, but not necesarily meaning to say mommy.

Name: Hermiones_Heartache (Signed) · Date: 05/17/05 18:33 · For: Slipping, Sliding, Falling Backward
Well, there was good plot development and foreshadowing of later chapters. Tonks didn't seem to be acting like herself, but I really don't blame her, seeing as how Harry is now only five years old. This one wasn't too capturing, but it was a good chapter all the same.

Name: vigal (Signed) · Date: 05/17/05 12:54 · For: What Next?
WoW!!! I haven't had a chance to read your story for a while! man did you update!! I felt so sad for harry I thought for sure he wasn't returning.... Well can't wait to see what happens next...

Name: Tabitha Snape (Signed) · Date: 05/16/05 22:39 · For: Harry’s Second Tantrum and Mrs. Wealey’s Punishment
Ron is a brat in this story. I also think Mrs. Weasley is harsh. Harry is being bratty, but spanking like that is too degrading. I hate to sound like a psychologist or anything, and it's just a story. Great job writing.

Author's Response: I don't mind psychology. I happen to like it. Yes, both boys were brats. The spanking was actually put in because some readers thought it would make that better, I don't know. I knew some people would not approve.

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