Reviewer: hp_fan
Date: 05/22/05 15:22
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

great story!!!!! update really soon plz

Reviewer: ink_heart
Date: 05/21/05 22:21
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

I liked this chapter! Keep up the good work! And update soon!

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 05/20/05 17:44
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

this is an awesome story! update soon, please!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 05/20/05 17:43
Chapter: What Next?

YAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!! HE MADE IT!!!!!!! thank you very much for not letting us suffer any longer!! lol

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 05/20/05 16:43
Chapter: Faking Sick

Well, i most certainly hope its A!! Harry has got to go back to Hogwarts! This is torturing Harry! It's torturing me, too, come to think of it! AAAAAA!!!

Reviewer: dolphinchick114
Date: 05/20/05 16:10
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

i really like the entire story!! i thought the lesson would be more complicated but it was so simple, that i should have caught on days ago! BTW why did snape bother harry about his potion but leave malfoy alone? he really is a meanie isn't he? good story, keep writing, i wanna read more!!!

Author's Response: Snape's always done stuff like that. It is actually written in book five, when Snape banishes Harry's potion because he forgot one tiny thing, though his potion still looked okay. Meanwhile, Crabbe's, I think, was an utter mess, yet Harry got the zero, Crabbe at least got some points. Then there was when Snape smashed Harry's sample and gave him a zero.

Reviewer: nimue
Date: 05/20/05 9:12
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

Snape is an old git isn't he?! Glad to hear that you are doing a sequel as this is one of the best stories I've ever read on here.

Author's Response: Thank you. I never imagined I would be "one of the best" when I started this. Thank you, very much.

Reviewer: dolphinchick114
Date: 05/19/05 21:41
Chapter: Faking Sick

oh my gosh! thats so cruel!! its good that harry's been to the quidditch cup already or he would never know what he was missing!! but i think it should be A because he HAS to stay in his year. and if its c, then all hell will break lose with voldemort and stuff, but then he would be way ahead, but have a chance to redo all of his classes! but he HAS to go back this year, so definately A, but he should be cutting it really close, like the night before the train to hogwarts.

Reviewer: ink_heart
Date: 05/18/05 16:04
Chapter: What Next?

Is this the end of the story?

Author's Response: I did already answer this, but since you asked twice. NO! I will type "THE END" at the end of the last chapter. This is the last time I will answer for anybody.

Reviewer: ink_heart
Date: 05/18/05 16:04
Chapter: What Next?

Is this the end of the story?

Reviewer: DeerKillerBeemer
Date: 05/18/05 6:29
Chapter: What Next?

SWEET! Harry's back at Hogwarts *does happy dance*! yay! Okay, I love this chapter--it's awesome! Keep up the good work...hopefully you'll still continue the story even though Harry is back to his normal self. ;)

Author's Response: The story will continue for a bt still, I think to chapter 25. And since Honeydude already ruined the secret, there will be a sequel. The sequel will focus on something Harry learned over the last five chapters of this story.

Reviewer: Hermiones_Heartache
Date: 05/17/05 18:49
Chapter: Hogwarts Letters

I am soooooooooo sorry- the reviews by Hermiones_Secrets were actually mine- somehow it ended up under her name.

Author's Response: Don't worry about it. I'm just glad you like my story and are willing to review. Thank you for all your praise and feedback.

Reviewer: Hermiones_Secrets
Date: 05/17/05 18:45
Chapter: Hogwarts Letters

That was a nice chapter, explaining a lot. It shows how much more child-like Harry is becoming. Also, I've got a question. Where is Mr. Weasley? He couldn't possibly be at work day and night? Is he dead? Just wondering. Good chapter 9/10. (Don't worry, I hardly ever give tens- even a nine is extremely rare for me.)

Reviewer: Hermiones_Heartache
Date: 05/17/05 18:34
Chapter: Slipping, Sliding, Falling Backward

Oh yeah, one more thing. Was Harry really reffering to Mrs. Weasley as "Mommy?" Or did he mean his own mother? Just wondering.

Author's Response: You have to focus on his frame of mind. He woke up scared, and thought he was alone. Any five-year-old would ask for a maternal figure. He just wanted comfort. And Mrs. Weasley was fulfilling the job of a mother. So, he did mean her, but not necesarily meaning to say mommy.

Reviewer: Hermiones_Heartache
Date: 05/17/05 18:33
Chapter: Slipping, Sliding, Falling Backward

Well, there was good plot development and foreshadowing of later chapters. Tonks didn't seem to be acting like herself, but I really don't blame her, seeing as how Harry is now only five years old. This one wasn't too capturing, but it was a good chapter all the same.

Reviewer: vigal
Date: 05/17/05 12:54
Chapter: What Next?

WoW!!! I haven't had a chance to read your story for a while! man did you update!! I felt so sad for harry I thought for sure he wasn't returning.... Well can't wait to see what happens next...

Reviewer: Tabitha Snape
Date: 05/16/05 22:39
Chapter: Harry’s Second Tantrum and Mrs. Wealey’s Punishment

Ron is a brat in this story. I also think Mrs. Weasley is harsh. Harry is being bratty, but spanking like that is too degrading. I hate to sound like a psychologist or anything, and it's just a story. Great job writing.

Author's Response: I don't mind psychology. I happen to like it. Yes, both boys were brats. The spanking was actually put in because some readers thought it would make that better, I don't know. I knew some people would not approve.

Reviewer: Tabitha Snape
Date: 05/16/05 22:35
Chapter: What Next?

You know, if I were Harry I wouldn't really care if I sucked my thumb, I'd just be happy I wasn't stuck at the Burrow for five more years!! I think he might need transformed again... Very interesting story, quite gripping, I lke your Harry and Ginny and Hermione and Ron pairings.

Author's Response: What do you mean he needs transformed again? How so? You're right about the thumb sucking, it's just a side affect from being little so long and will pass. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: jkruleslucky13
Date: 05/16/05 13:51
Chapter: Faking Sick

I like the story, and would definetly go for A, because Harry needs to stay friends with Hermione and Ron, even if they are snogging and stuff. I also think that Mrs. Weasley could be just a bit nicer. In the books she's very nice, and only strict if her children do something that might endanger themselves, whereas in this story you're turning her into the mum from hell. *Sorry if I offended anyone by my bad language* Yeah, but still it's a good story.

Author's Response: Sorry. I didn't mean for her to come across THAT mean, or strict, whichever. But when she is nice, isn't she exceptionally nice?

Reviewer: ArrabellaWeasley
Date: 05/16/05 13:38
Chapter: What Next?

yay! i knew he would grow up! good job! it was a good chapter! ouch.. those little clothes must have hurt.. lol. update soon!

Author's Response: Update will come by the end of the week.

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