Reviewer: madford222
Date: 06/06/05 23:04
Chapter: The Letter

I have been reading and rereading and rereading this story, it is one of my absolute favorite stories. You have inspired me as an author, and I wonder how a person can write with such imagination. You have my deepest awe for writing such a story, I absolutely love it! Never stop writing, you're an amazing author! Loved the story, hilarious!!!!!!!!!!! ********** (10 stars... out of five!!!)

Reviewer: ArrabellaWeasley
Date: 06/01/05 8:49
Chapter: Detention and Desire

its over already? sigh.. i guess the end was coming inevitably... It was a good chapter, but the end sort of caught me by surprise. I guess it had to end there, because you couldnt really go on with a story called the punishment of immaturity if he grew up now.. but theres a seqel, thats good. im happy. you did a really good job on the story as a whole, and im glad he turned back into his normal age :) Good job, and ill start to read the new one soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm really glad that you, and so many others, liked tyhis story so much.

Reviewer: bloody hearts
Date: 05/31/05 21:00
Chapter: Detention and Desire

wow. this story was amazing. i couldnt stop reading it, i was so mad when i finish all the chapters and then i would keep checking for another one to be added. its so addicting. amazing job. i cant wait to read the sequal ~bloody hearts

Reviewer: Connor Landon
Date: 05/31/05 9:56
Chapter: Detention and Desire

Woo hoo! this chapter was ok, and i'm glad to have a sequel. though the last part of it seemed to keep away from harry's punishment from dumbledore. i loved the first part of it, tho, and am really looking forward to the sequel.

Author's Response: The end was a wrap-up. I wanted to show how everything went back to normal. Harry learned his lesson, as needed. Glad to hear you will read the sequel.

Reviewer: Jenn_Weasley
Date: 05/31/05 8:54
Chapter: Detention and Desire

Bravo! I have enjoyed this story very much! I'm glad to have a sequel to read. Thanks!

Reviewer: dolphinchick114
Date: 05/30/05 20:39
Chapter: Detention and Desire

awesome!! i hope the sequel is as good as this one is. i don't knbow if ive said it yet, but i like this story, i'll read the sequel next!!

Reviewer: GryffindorGirl
Date: 05/30/05 20:01
Chapter: Detention and Desire

That was awesome!!! I loved it! I'm gonna go read the sequel now...yea!

Reviewer: ink_heart
Date: 05/30/05 16:27
Chapter: Detention and Desire

that was bloody brilliant! I am sad to see it end. But I am starting your sequal! YAY! 10/10! ^___^

Reviewer: SparrowsGirl01
Date: 05/30/05 13:41
Chapter: Detention and Desire

I loved this story! Cant wait 4 the sequel! It's characters were very good, and Snape and Hagrid were both perfect! 100000000000000000000000000/10!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that I got them good. Thanks for the score and praise. Sequel is available already, no waiting. Check Dark/Angsty stories.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 05/30/05 12:03
Chapter: Detention and Desire

Good ending and great segway to the sequel. I'm off to find it now!

Author's Response: I hope you, and everybody who like this story will like the sequel. Thank you.

Reviewer: padfoot36212
Date: 05/30/05 11:06
Chapter: Detention and Desire

ooh...this it SOOOOO good! I can't wait to read the sequel! Smiles, Paddy :)

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it.

Reviewer: GryffindorGirl
Date: 05/30/05 0:37
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

I definately agree that your story is the best story I've read here--even one the best fan fiction stories I've read! I enjoyed the story very much and I can't wait for your sequel! When do expect that you'll put that on here? thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. The sequel will be posted sooner than you might expect. Especially because I just posted the last chapter of this story, chapter 25.

Reviewer: Connor Landon
Date: 05/29/05 21:41
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

I liked this chapter, even though it seems to get away from Harry's revelationy-thing. But this is a great story and i hope you continue with it.

Reviewer: Splatteh
Date: 05/28/05 0:13
Chapter: The Letter

This is the first fanfic I ever actually read!! It's fab, I can't wait for the next chapters... I just think it was odd how Dumbledore was a bit Ooc in the first chapter (very funny) and then late retains his usual attitude..

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you continue to enjoy this story and give reviews and feedback. I also hope you would read the new sequel.

Reviewer: Hermiones_Heartache
Date: 05/27/05 14:19
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

Hi, it's me again. This is a really awesome story, I hope you know that, and this chapter was among the best. True, it's not as funny as most of them but it's tying up loose ends and showing us that everything is back to normal. Rock on!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I appreciate what you said.

Reviewer: SparrowsGirl01
Date: 05/25/05 20:12
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

Wow, really GOOD! I'm glad hes turned back, u no? I like where this is going. SNAPE SUX! He's evil, but I like Alan Rickman *sigh* U no, Snape cant be purely evil, cuz somewhere there gotta be some place way way way far that u wouldn't no it was there where he's nice...or not! I hope soo, tho. 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10

Author's Response: It's possible for him to be nice. I'm still worried he may be a spy or double agent for Voldemort. He's vindictive enough, though I would hope Dumbledore would know if he was a traitor.

Reviewer: vigal
Date: 05/24/05 22:54
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

OMG! I have followed from the start.... Wow... hagrad have harry a detention?! I am also glad to see harry back to normal.... although the chapter when HE attacked freaked me out.... can't wait to see where your going....

Author's Response: Sadly, I'm only going to the end of the first week. Just giving some closure, showing things returning to normal. To see where I truly go, look for the sequel, already in progress, which starts around Christmas of the same year.

Reviewer: ink_heart
Date: 05/24/05 18:45
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

When are you going to update? I hope I don't sound rude or annoying if I do tell me!

Reviewer: ArrabellaWeasley
Date: 05/23/05 11:46
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

uh oh.. saturday morning detention does NOT sound like fun... oh well. at least he's not like 3 anymore.. good job with the chapter. update really sooN!

Reviewer: hp_fan
Date: 05/22/05 15:22
Chapter: Harry “Trouble” Potter

great story!!!!! update really soon plz

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