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Name: hayles_potter (Signed) · Date: 04/04/06 8:47 · For: The Letter
Hey.. Added you to my favourite stories because I do love this story. it makes me laugh so much. Well Done, It's great!

Author's Response: Thank you. i'm glad I was able to make you laugh.


Name: Last HP Relative (Signed) · Date: 04/01/06 19:36 · For: Faking Sick
ye know... i think that something else is going to happen... well harry turns back and all that yeah...but something else happens...if ya dont get what i mean than check chapter 15...yeah


Name: thisisfun (Signed) · Date: 03/29/06 21:43 · For: A New Family for Harry
Ha! This is laughable. 9/10


Name: Ginny806 (Signed) · Date: 03/25/06 17:08 · For: The Letter
I have read this story many times,and I love it. But what is a scrapped knee? I thought it was scrape?


Name: Thecaretaker (Signed) · Date: 03/21/06 15:48 · For: Detention and Desire
I thorough enjoyed this. Reading it, I thought it would be interesting to see this as a movie. I can't wait to read the sequel!

Author's Response: A movie? Fan fiction is one thing, but I'm pretty sure a fan movie would get the attention of some lawyers. I'm glad you liked it, thank you.


Name: mgle_teacher (Signed) · Date: 03/18/06 15:13 · For: Desperate Time
well...I must say...I find this story quite hilarious and sad at the same time. You've done a wonderful job of capturing the fears and mentality of young children...but also maintaining Harry's personality all his own...and showing his vulnerability...great!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am so glad you enjoyed it and hope you might consider the sequel too. Thank you again.


Name: Dory_the_Fishie (Signed) · Date: 03/18/06 13:21 · For: A Dark Plan, a Daring Plan
Great. Your grammar is really good, something that always makes a fic more enjoyable for me to read. I loved Mrs. Weasley in this. And Sergeant Philips. Yeah, that was cool. And funny. One bit of concrit: remember that in dialogue, if the character is asking a question, a question mark goes at the end, not a comma. Ex: "What's your name?" she asked. That was one thing I noticed. Otherwise, great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you liked it. I am surprised you liked my Mrs. Weasley, because most people did not. But, the thing about the question marks is only partly right. Either way is acceptable and I prefer the comma as it is not the end of a sentence. In cases where I did not write "he said" or "she said," I did use a question mark. Thank you again for your review.


Name: mybabyblaze (Signed) · Date: 03/14/06 21:22 · For: The Letter
hey. i didnt rele find this one amusing. but i havnt read the rest so dotn listen to me!!!


Name: mswitch (Signed) · Date: 02/25/06 17:42 · For: The Letter
this was a really funny story. you have alot of talent.

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you will read the sequel too.


Name: Big_Kelpie (Signed) · Date: 02/20/06 9:16 · For: Detention and Desire
great story... i loved it.. definitly a favorite.. going to read the sequel right now

Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad that this story is still getting readers, despite that I cannot update it anymore.


Name: Conundrum (Anonymous) · Date: 02/16/06 8:24 · For: Detention and Desire
I can't believe people liked this so much! My story was basically the same, but everyone hated it. Harry was wetting and messing himself, wearing diapers and being treated like a baby. He was even younger, so it was more likely for him to do that stuff. I don't see the difference.

Author's Response: Er, sorry. I can't help what people think. Besides, he did not mess himself and pullups are not necesarily diapers.


Name: liberemitto (Signed) · Date: 10/31/05 21:19 · For: Detention and Desire
This story was really good... when I read the part where Harry said 'I wanna be a little boy again' I was actually tearing... you helped me realise that Harry was just a child who had an adult's burden put on him from the moment his parents were killed. Also you've got some very good points.. themes.. like the part where Ron gets jealous of the attention and love that Harry is receiving, but in JKR's books its always Harry's feeling jealous of Ron.. and so thats interesting. However, it's quite clear from the start that what Dumbledore wants Harry to realise is that Sirius's death isn't his fault, but that isn't very prominent in your fanfic... its like only at the end part that Harry goes and sees all the photos, and then he realises that Sirius's death isn't his fault. I think if Harry had kept insisting that Sirius's death was his fault all throughout the story, and you portrayed the changes in his attitude throughout the story, then he saw the photos and came to a realisation that Sirius's death wasn't his fault, it would be a better fanfic, rather than Harry upon seeing the photos realises all of a sudden that Sirius's death isn't his fault.


Name: SimplyMe (Signed) · Date: 10/29/05 19:40 · For: The Letter
Very nice story... I'm not sure that 'hunor fic' is the best category for it, maybe general would have been more appripriate. There is many funny moments but they don't take the main part of the story. Anyway, good work!


Name: Hmeschooler (Signed) · Date: 10/20/05 1:17 · For: Detention and Desire
Wow, I just read the whole thing, and I like it. It's a very unique way of getting Harry past all of the angst and stuff. I loved him as a child! It was so true! All of it. I spend alot of time around small children, and during the whole thing I found myself going "Yeah, I remember that. Mm hmm, they do that all the time." I really enjoyed this, thank you.


Name: Hmeschooler (Signed) · Date: 10/20/05 1:17 · For: Detention and Desire
Wow, I just read the whole thing, and I like it. It's a very unique way of getting Harry past all of the angst and stuff. I loved him as a child! It was so true! All of it. I spend alot of time around small children, and during the whole thing I found myself going "Yeah, I remember that. Mm hmm, they do that all the time." I really enjoyed this, thank you.


Name: harryandginnyxx (Signed) · Date: 10/08/05 7:56 · For: Detention and Desire
whooooa, great story, I was hooked and completely obsessed with it! I'm SO reading the sequel!!!


Name: Femme (Anonymous) · Date: 09/30/05 23:51 · For: The Joys of Childhood
Oh My God!!! This is so funny! I can just picture a five year old Harry running naked through the house. I'll never be able to close my eyes with out seeing that! I can't wait to read your second story!


Name: YuleBallPartner (Signed) · Date: 09/06/05 20:41 · For: Emotions of a Child
Wow it took my mom 5 times to get me off the FAMILY computer. It maks me want to cry!*sobsniff* can I base a story off this I'm Impressed!

Author's Response: Well, I'm a little shocked. You want to write a fanfiction about my fanfiction? Careful, my head might swell. Seriously, I am very flattered. I don't see any outward problems with that. But I would ask that you run your ideas by me first, just give me a summary. (Not that you have to. Afterall, none of the characters are mine.) Anyway, I hope you like the rest of the story and it's sequel. Thank you.


Name: Hermiones_Heartache (Signed) · Date: 09/05/05 12:20 · For: Detention and Desire
All in all, this was a good fan fic. There were some places where it seemed kind of OOC, and there were some placc es where it oculd have been better. But the story and your style of writing it made up for that. Can't wait to read the sequel. Good job!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you like my sequel too.


Name: GINNY__POTTER258 (Signed) · Date: 08/29/05 10:54 · For: Detention and Desire
Great story! it's very intresting that harry turns back into a four year old boy! i haven't seen it done before that's very creative! 10/10 :)


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