Reviewer: grim reaper
Date: 04/19/06 20:40
Chapter: A Dark Plan, a Daring Plan

You are cruel to portray him like that.

Reviewer: grim reaper
Date: 04/19/06 19:24
Chapter: Faking Sick

I'm thinking C maybe. That would be very funny.

Reviewer: Tinka Blinka
Date: 04/17/06 11:27
Chapter: Truth or Nightmare

I love this freaking chapter (truth or nightmare) i must have read it a thousand times! i even read the sequel to this story...OMG I LOVE IT!

Reviewer: Famel
Date: 04/11/06 20:16
Chapter: The Joys of Childhood

OMG! THIS STORY IS HILARIOUS! Update soon! 10/10!!!

Reviewer: tpt42
Date: 04/04/06 12:41
Chapter: The Letter

I read this once it was complete, and it was pretty good. Although I think it belongs to the general section cause of the dark moments and the fact the whole thing was about Harry not blaming himself for someone's death. Kinda seemed serious to me. But I'm not saying that they were not light or funny parts. But like I said above, great story, I even read the sequel, waiting for your latest chapter to come out. You are probably one of the most imaginative authors (in a story is not to crazy and it still makes sense sort of way) I've come across. So good job on that as well.

Author's Response: I appreciate your reviews and compliments. I still have trouble believing it when people call me the "most imaginative" or stuff like that. But maybe I'm in the top group. I am planning something very unique for my next story, though I'm having trouble with a plotline. Thanks again.

Reviewer: hayles_potter
Date: 04/04/06 8:47
Chapter: The Letter

Hey.. Added you to my favourite stories because I do love this story. it makes me laugh so much. Well Done, It's great!

Author's Response: Thank you. i'm glad I was able to make you laugh.

Reviewer: Last HP Relative
Date: 04/01/06 19:36
Chapter: Faking Sick

ye know... i think that something else is going to happen... well harry turns back and all that yeah...but something else happens...if ya dont get what i mean than check chapter 15...yeah

Reviewer: thisisfun
Date: 03/29/06 21:43
Chapter: A New Family for Harry

Ha! This is laughable. 9/10

Reviewer: Ginny806
Date: 03/25/06 17:08
Chapter: The Letter

I have read this story many times,and I love it. But what is a scrapped knee? I thought it was scrape?

Reviewer: Thecaretaker
Date: 03/21/06 15:48
Chapter: Detention and Desire

I thorough enjoyed this. Reading it, I thought it would be interesting to see this as a movie. I can't wait to read the sequel!

Author's Response: A movie? Fan fiction is one thing, but I'm pretty sure a fan movie would get the attention of some lawyers. I'm glad you liked it, thank you.

Reviewer: mgle_teacher
Date: 03/18/06 15:13
Chapter: Desperate Time

well...I must say...I find this story quite hilarious and sad at the same time. You've done a wonderful job of capturing the fears and mentality of young children...but also maintaining Harry's personality all his own...and showing his vulnerability...great!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am so glad you enjoyed it and hope you might consider the sequel too. Thank you again.

Reviewer: Dory_the_Fishie
Date: 03/18/06 13:21
Chapter: A Dark Plan, a Daring Plan

Great. Your grammar is really good, something that always makes a fic more enjoyable for me to read. I loved Mrs. Weasley in this. And Sergeant Philips. Yeah, that was cool. And funny. One bit of concrit: remember that in dialogue, if the character is asking a question, a question mark goes at the end, not a comma. Ex: "What's your name?" she asked. That was one thing I noticed. Otherwise, great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you liked it. I am surprised you liked my Mrs. Weasley, because most people did not. But, the thing about the question marks is only partly right. Either way is acceptable and I prefer the comma as it is not the end of a sentence. In cases where I did not write "he said" or "she said," I did use a question mark. Thank you again for your review.

Reviewer: mybabyblaze
Date: 03/14/06 21:22
Chapter: The Letter

hey. i didnt rele find this one amusing. but i havnt read the rest so dotn listen to me!!!

Reviewer: mswitch
Date: 02/25/06 17:42
Chapter: The Letter

this was a really funny story. you have alot of talent.

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you will read the sequel too.

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 02/20/06 9:16
Chapter: Detention and Desire

great story... i loved it.. definitly a favorite.. going to read the sequel right now

Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad that this story is still getting readers, despite that I cannot update it anymore.

Reviewer: Conundrum
Date: 02/16/06 8:24
Chapter: Detention and Desire

I can't believe people liked this so much! My story was basically the same, but everyone hated it. Harry was wetting and messing himself, wearing diapers and being treated like a baby. He was even younger, so it was more likely for him to do that stuff. I don't see the difference.

Author's Response: Er, sorry. I can't help what people think. Besides, he did not mess himself and pullups are not necesarily diapers.

Reviewer: liberemitto
Date: 10/31/05 21:19
Chapter: Detention and Desire

This story was really good... when I read the part where Harry said 'I wanna be a little boy again' I was actually tearing... you helped me realise that Harry was just a child who had an adult's burden put on him from the moment his parents were killed. Also you've got some very good points.. themes.. like the part where Ron gets jealous of the attention and love that Harry is receiving, but in JKR's books its always Harry's feeling jealous of Ron.. and so thats interesting. However, it's quite clear from the start that what Dumbledore wants Harry to realise is that Sirius's death isn't his fault, but that isn't very prominent in your fanfic... its like only at the end part that Harry goes and sees all the photos, and then he realises that Sirius's death isn't his fault. I think if Harry had kept insisting that Sirius's death was his fault all throughout the story, and you portrayed the changes in his attitude throughout the story, then he saw the photos and came to a realisation that Sirius's death wasn't his fault, it would be a better fanfic, rather than Harry upon seeing the photos realises all of a sudden that Sirius's death isn't his fault.

Reviewer: SimplyMe
Date: 10/29/05 19:40
Chapter: The Letter

Very nice story... I'm not sure that 'hunor fic' is the best category for it, maybe general would have been more appripriate. There is many funny moments but they don't take the main part of the story. Anyway, good work!

Reviewer: Hmeschooler
Date: 10/20/05 1:17
Chapter: Detention and Desire

Wow, I just read the whole thing, and I like it. It's a very unique way of getting Harry past all of the angst and stuff. I loved him as a child! It was so true! All of it. I spend alot of time around small children, and during the whole thing I found myself going "Yeah, I remember that. Mm hmm, they do that all the time." I really enjoyed this, thank you.

Reviewer: Hmeschooler
Date: 10/20/05 1:17
Chapter: Detention and Desire

Wow, I just read the whole thing, and I like it. It's a very unique way of getting Harry past all of the angst and stuff. I loved him as a child! It was so true! All of it. I spend alot of time around small children, and during the whole thing I found myself going "Yeah, I remember that. Mm hmm, they do that all the time." I really enjoyed this, thank you.

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