Reviewer: HarryandLunaPotter
Date: 07/11/13 5:29
Chapter: Detention and Desire

This was an amazing story. One of the best I have ever read. I didn't even mind that this was HP/GW (just look at my penname, you'll see my ship) because you actually have some character development. I love it! I always listen to Evanscence while reading fanfics like this for some reason... It just seems to fit it. If you read a story I have on Fanfiction. Net, you can look at my disclaimer. Search Harry Raised Weasley fanfic. My disclaimer said, "If I owned HP, the fanfic "Harry Potter and the Punishement for Immaturity" would be turned into a movie. That is one great fanfic. Great job, Obliviate." Hehe.

Reviewer: nitram166
Date: 07/29/11 1:31
Chapter: Hogwarts Letters

I think you should let him try just being little.. for once I mean.
It could result in some funny occasions.. Thus he´d be awesomely cute.

Reviewer: candyappley
Date: 05/10/08 17:31
Chapter: Turning Five … Again


Reviewer: candyappley
Date: 05/10/08 16:08
Chapter: The Letter


Reviewer: Spice
Date: 11/14/07 10:55
Chapter: Detention and Desire

I don't understand why its in the humor section. I think if you tallied up the funny/ angsty moments, they'd balance each other out. And the story dragged too long. It was interesting and innovative, but...

Reviewer: buggy2121
Date: 09/19/07 8:21
Chapter: Harry's Tantrum

this is so funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it's stupid even
no offense :D

Reviewer: x_dobby
Date: 09/08/07 20:16
Chapter: Detention and Desire

ohmigod. 2 1/2 hrs ago, i sat down and only intended to read 2-3 chapters. but i just couldn't stop reading!!!!! this is an awesome piece of writing you should be proud-- you have a gift :] kbyes;; OLiViA

Reviewer: Smeagoldor
Date: 04/28/07 15:33
Chapter: Faking Sick

Option B of COURSE

Reviewer: fuzz_nose
Date: 01/17/07 20:32
Chapter: Hogwarts Letters

I love this story! At first, until the time that Harry got to Grimmauld Place, I thought the story was going a bit slowly, but not anymore. I love the r/hr in it. Yay you!
Oh, and I just made the reviews a nice and round 530! Yay me!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/12/07 4:29
Chapter: Hermione’s Little Brother

I enjoy this story much more than its sequels..this is more humorous

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 12/22/06 10:00
Chapter: The Letter

Happy Holidays and happy Deathly hallows day!

Reviewer: harryandginny1165
Date: 12/22/06 4:30
Chapter: A New Family for Harry

this is a very entertaining story
well done so far

Reviewer: Moonysfullmoon
Date: 10/12/06 9:10
Chapter: The Letter


Reviewer: floof
Date: 09/08/06 23:40
Chapter: Hermione’s Little Brother

Nice. I cant believe that harry almost like killed that child

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. It is nice to get new reviews for this story since it has not been updated since its completion. I wouldn't say Harry almost killed him however. It was just a bump on the noggin. Kids hurt each other all the time.

Reviewer: floof
Date: 09/08/06 23:30
Chapter: Harry's Tantrum

I cannot imagine dumbledore doing this to harry.o well. your story

Reviewer: floof
Date: 09/08/06 23:25
Chapter: The Letter

This is one of my favorite stories. Keep on writing!

Reviewer: Peppermint123
Date: 08/26/06 19:51
Chapter: Detention and Desire

I really liked this story, I read the entire thing in one day!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: ms_ski
Date: 08/24/06 14:59
Chapter: Harry’s Second Tantrum and Mrs. Wealey’s Punishment

this is a terrible story. i hope you never have children if this is how you are going to treat them. making a child stand or kneel in a corner for hours is child abuse. and embarrassing them like this is just as bad. i was enjoying your story but i just can't continue to read it because of these things. you obviously know nothing about children and have never read about what a warm and nurturing mother molly weasly is. also, a 4 or 5 year old could not fit into a cradle, unless you mean a crib- which is an entirely different thing. and who carries a 5 year old around? my daughter is 3 and can walk perfectly well not to be carried around not to mention how heavy a 5 year old is. do you see kindergardeners being carried around? good grief! get a clue!

Author's Response: Honesty, however brutal, is always appreciated. Thank you.

Reviewer: VarceVickley
Date: 08/17/06 22:05
Chapter: The Letter

funny? severe self neglect and believing you caused someone to die isn't funny... but you could have written OotP for rowling LOL.

Reviewer: moine
Date: 08/17/06 16:34
Chapter: What Next?

You didnt say who the new teacher was?

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