this is THE cutest story ever!
quite cute, I reckon Fred and George would have been more spontanous than that well it is kinda hilarious.
That was so good and totally funny!
really good- loved it - i give it a 10-
it is already in my favorites :-)
my first review was kinda short,coz i was in a hurry... anyway...i was dying of laughter reading your story! i love fred and george and their wacky antics. i like the part where they shove ron&herm into the closet...anyways,good job!! very funny and cute! keep up the good work!
absolutely hilarious!!!!!!!! *gives thumbs up sign* good job! weLL d...o...n...e....
This was absolutely hilarious! I loved the bsck-fired chocolate plan, hilarous. I wonder if Ron ever made it to the toilet?
I'm generally not a 'reviewer,' but this story deserves its kudos. The perfect combination of hilarity and sweetness makes this one a hit.
Oh, so funny. Fred and George were perfectly in character. The part with Mr. and Mrs. Weasley was HILARIOUS! And the picture of Percy in swimming trunks............ewwwww!!! Loved it, loved it, loved it!!!!!!! 10/10
YES! Lovely, really. I hadn't the foggiest of ideas what they were doing in the closet. Great job! p.s. Loved the part about Hogwarts: A History
Writing something that really is funny is no easy trick, but you've accomplished it. I really laughed out loud. Very funny and very in character for Fred & George. Including a bit more about Ron and Hermione snogging in the closet would have been good, too.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! MY WORST NIGHTMARE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PERCY IN SWIMTRUNKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW DO YOU KNOW!?!!?!?!?!!?!?! ARE YOU STALKING ME!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?
Nice Twist! Good Job. xx
awww.... loved it
SCARY THING FRED AND GEORGE....jk...They are really funny the way you put them....hey maybe I should have them hook me up with a guy...*Warning: I wouldn't wanna see and Percy in swimming trunks*...<3
ha ha ha!! that was soo funny and good. keep it up! fred and george rok!
Very funny! I laughed out loud!
percy in swimmingtrunks, that made me laugh... horrible thought! great story, liked Ron really much.
very cute and clever story
Aww I love Fred and George! Great job!