This needs something added -- like another chapter or two! Poor, poor kids! What happens tomorrow?
This was a very touching story and you conveyed the tension between the two in a very elegant manner. Absolutely fantastic job.
Stupid Ron. Stupid fraidy cat Harry. Oh well...
ARGH what happens tomorrow???? that was awesome but...a sequel??
Wow. You are definately one of the best writers I've found on this site. Great job!
Breathe in ... breathe out ... I'm not going to cry, I won't do it. Serioulsy, what is this? The bazillionth story I've read by you, and you are still giving me the chills! I think you are seriously one of the best writers on this site, and I mean that. 10.
No!!!! I need to know what happens next! Please update? Pretty please?
NO!!! I MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!!! *begs on bended knee* Oh, that was a wrencher, that was. Brownie points for thee!
That was excellent.
Oh, that tugged at my heartstrings! I wonder how many relationships start with those feelings on both sides? Or, more likely, how many never start because neither are willing to take the risk of being rejected. Excellent job!