Reviewer: AmyChris
Date: 11/11/04 17:10
Chapter: What Are We Waiting For?

OMG!! That was amazing!! It sounded so much like the real books! You are a very talented writer!! Fantastic job!! I loved it!! :)

Reviewer: Aquira
Date: 11/09/04 21:02
Chapter: What Are We Waiting For?

Great R/Hr fanfic. I loved it. My favorite part was Harry's bit at the end. "Well, its about bloody time." Very true words.

Reviewer: Asphyxiated
Date: 11/09/04 4:41
Chapter: What Are We Waiting For?

Oooh I just loved this little ficlet! Lovely work! It was so incredibly In Character that you didn't even have to mention whose POV you switched to, every time you did. (Of course, the pattern helped, but still *wink*). Very nicely structured. The reoccurring 'I wanted to ...' made it flow really well, and you managed to use lots of flashbacks without it getting old or tedious. Quite a feat if you ask me! Congrats! A great R/H one shot :D

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