Reviews For Murderous Love
Reviewer: Madnessisme
Date: 02/11/06 8:02
Chapter: Murderous Love

Lots of fanfic writers prefer to leave Peter out of their stories, pretending that he doesn't exist because of what he did. I love the fact that you went into his mind, and managed to grasp what he might have been thinking at the time. It explains a whole lot, and I enjoyed myself reading this. The paragraph about Lily's name was beautiful. I could feel my heart breaking for the poor fellow.

The only thing that I would like to point out is this sentence:
Why I betrayed the Potter’s to Voldemort.
'Potter's' should be 'Potters'.

Other than that, it's really good. Very in-character in my opinion, and really makes you think. Good job!

Reviewer: d_hr_forbiddenluv
Date: 02/05/05 15:53
Chapter: Murderous Love

You know, that all does make sense. I'm not the kind of person to stick with the 'obvious' couples, but to see Peter's point-of-view, that was really a very fascinating fanfic. I never thought of them before. It' very well-written.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I think it's a bit choppy, personally, because I tend to repeat myself a bit too much, but then again it was a Sunday morning, I have excuses! Thanks for reviewing! ^^

Reviewer: Sirius Blaak
Date: 01/21/05 18:34
Chapter: Murderous Love

never thought of it that way before. very interesting angle! it was very detailed, and it dovetailed with the HP books perfectly! 10/10 :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, I wasn't really sure about it, but the idea came when I was re-reading book 3, I just wondered why Voldermort *gasp she said his name* Yesh...anyhoo, I was wondering why he gave Lily a way out when he was a cruel murderer....^^ Anyway, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Purplejady
Date: 01/19/05 11:10
Chapter: Murderous Love

Oh-mi-god, luff, this rawks. I'm almost nearly crying. I dunno why -sniffs- Poor Lily... And I suppose this Fic even makes me think 'Poor Peter'. Tis tres brill... BRILL I SAY. Anywho- 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you *snuggles* I'm glad you like it, and please, please, please update yours soon, pwease?

Reviewer: Jennifer_Cairns
Date: 01/16/05 19:52
Chapter: Murderous Love

Excellent! I almost felt sorry for Peter... almost. Really interesting idea here would like to see a longer fic along these lines.

Author's Response: Thank you for reveiwing, and it was so positive! I wasn't sure how people would take this story but...hey! I know what you mean about almost feeling sorry for him, he seems so sad and frail but then he did kill two people, and countless others after he went back to Voldie. Anyway, thanks for the review! ^^

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