Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 01/06/05 11:04
Chapter: Remus Remembers

Liking it, liking it, LOVING IT!!!!

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 01/06/05 10:57
Chapter: A Black Memory

I'm loving it, everything is perfect - keep it up!

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 01/06/05 10:49
Chapter: London Excursions

Excellent, I love your style.

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 01/06/05 10:42
Chapter: Marauder Memories

wow this is great, i can't believe I'm only reading it for the first time now! I'm off to catch up! P.S: If you're living with Sirius, I'm living with Remus - hands off everyone, he's mine.

Reviewer: padfootprongs4eva
Date: 01/05/05 22:55
Chapter: Moony and the Maid

i really like the way you are writing these chapters. i think everything in them is perfect, but i think that they could be longer. i would really like to read more about this story. please update asap

Reviewer: MoonyPadfootProngs
Date: 01/01/05 19:11
Chapter: Moony and the Maid

Great chapter. This is now my favorite one. I loved the part with James and Lily. I've actually known guys who were like that to me. Guys can be so immature sometimes. Anyway, the chapter was the perfect length and I really enjoyed reading it. Don't change a thing. Great job. :)

Reviewer: Hermiones_Revenge
Date: 12/31/04 16:25
Chapter: Moony and the Maid

Honestly though, I loved this chapter. And all your other ones for that matter...err it makes me mad. I think I've said this before, but many times I forget that I'm not reading this straight from the book, usually when I remember that when I'm reading the books I'm not staring at a computer screen. Perfect amount of description, dialogue, Remus, Sirius...eergh! I'm normally a fan of short, quick, chapters, but your story is an exception. Keep writing or I shall...I shall...I shall have to find something else to do while putting off my homework. OH and I agree, i do NOT want to go back to school either. ANYTHING BUT THAT! Oh, and UPDATE! (10 stars by the way)

Reviewer: PadfootLvsOn
Date: 12/31/04 9:38
Chapter: Moony and the Maid

I think this chapter was perfect. Not too long and not too short. I like when you combine Sirius writing w/ the real life action. I think I prefer Sirius writing more but hey that's just me. I don't think you need any more descriptions really. Yeah, this chapter's pretty much perfect. Great!

Reviewer: Hermiones_Revenge
Date: 12/30/04 17:52
Chapter: Woes and Women Troubles

ugh, can't write, correction to my review "...James kept moving HIS desk towards Lily's..."

Reviewer: Hermiones_Revenge
Date: 12/30/04 17:51
Chapter: Woes and Women Troubles

Finally! I'm baaaaaack! All right, so I haven't actually finished the story yet, but I HAVE TO REVIEW NOW! First of all, I forgot halfway through that I wasn't reading this straight from the book. Second of all, I had just finished reading the part where James kept moving her desk towards Lily's and sticking his hair in her face etc etc as she attempted to ignore him...yeah, that whole part sounded like you sat in my Biology class and took notes on everything that happened between me and my evil friend who sits behind me. ALSO, the same evil friend recently attacked me with Axe deoderant body spray (similar to cologne if you think about it) and it was...not good. Ok, i'll finish your story now...wow that was a long review...

Reviewer: CurlyQue
Date: 12/29/04 20:21
Chapter: Woes and Women Troubles

MORE!

Reviewer: CurlyQue
Date: 12/29/04 19:34
Chapter: Remus Remembers

Loved it! yayy!

Reviewer: CurlyQue
Date: 12/29/04 19:19
Chapter: Marauder Memories

oh...GOOD! Love it, update!

Reviewer: chrislupin025
Date: 12/27/04 21:13
Chapter: Marauder Memories

this was very good me love

Reviewer: Hermione2723
Date: 12/27/04 20:14
Chapter: Moony and the Maid

Great chapter! UPDATE SOON

Reviewer: Hermione2723
Date: 12/27/04 19:55
Chapter: Moony and the Maid

pfc

Reviewer: Little Loony
Date: 12/21/04 10:36
Chapter: Woes and Women Troubles

EEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!Euch. Bellatrix (venomus evil vile bitch of a woman) and rodolphus. that all i have to say on that subject. And it is possible to like someone who is not real. Although i am not sure as to what extreme you can. Like the story

Reviewer: OrangesWithBling
Date: 12/19/04 15:32
Chapter: Woes and Women Troubles

Wow, i really like this story so far. Its nice to see a story of the Marauders from a different point of view!! Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: PadfootLvsOn
Date: 12/17/04 16:04
Chapter: Woes and Women Troubles

I love this story so much. This wasn't my favorite chapter but you said it was for build up so that's understandable. I like the emotional chapters and actually like it better when Remus is just reading the diary but it's interesting both ways. Great Job!

Reviewer: MoonyPadfootProngs
Date: 12/16/04 10:44
Chapter: Woes and Women Troubles

This is my favorite chapter so far. I loved it. And I love when you write about Moony, he's my favorite Marauder. Keep up the good work!!

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