Um.. isn't James a chaser? I thought he was only a seeker in the films...... This chapter was really funny. It made me laugh soo much.
Awesome! Can't wait for the next one!!!
I'm in love with Sirius even though he is a pillock. And I also love this story. well not literally, but it's still really good.. I'll shut up now.
Das is sehr gut. Okay, I admit it, I'm meant to be doing my German Hwk now... but I had to read this!
Liking it lots and lots.
It wasn't too short, it was just the right length.
Vry good chapter (again) This was really enjoyable to read. A good mix of techniques.
Great last sentence! Rejection from an old lady. Lol. This chapter was very well written. Well done!
This is really really cool so far. I reallly like the way you've captured Siriu's character. And Remus's come to that. 10/10
You updated! Yay!
Great chapter--II love it that Peter figured out how to get in the other dorm and almost died!! Little rat! I too adore the lightening bolt thing, glad to see Lily is coming around. Also love to see that Sirius is getting a dose of reality--he is my fave, next to Snape (ala EllieK/Orlaith). Good to see they both are attracted to strong, stubborn women. Still love the diary concept!
I always find that I absolutely adore the latest installment -- it really does reflect the marauders how I pictured them! I think this story is fantabulous -- Please update soon!
Ummm... I haven't reviewed this before so I'll speak about the whole story. Anyhoooo.... I LOVE your story!! I liked the fact that James signed his name with a lightning bolt, its really freaky! I love the James/Lily bits and i also liked the fact that Sirius got a taste of his own medicine, because he needed taken down a peg or three... I loved that he likes Elise now, it gives hope to unpopular girls everywhere (ie me..) Thanks!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Good chapter. It may seem harsh but poor Sirius has to learn his lesson eventually!
Great great great but sooo long of a chapter (and a long time since an update)!
Brilliant stuff - thank you, thank you. thank you for updating! BTW, I wonder what house Andromeda was in, ya know, Sirius' cousin, as he said she was decent. I always thought she might have been in Gryffindor too, but if your sticking with Sirius as the first in 200 years - fair enough! Wonderful chapter, I really loved it.
Well written. I like all the different flashbacks. I think Sirius is a bit reckless and arrogant, but thats the way I like him. I like all the characters and I like that you didnt make James and Sirius carbon copies of eachother.
I really liked this chapter. I am enjoying every line of this story!! I also enjoyed the Remus and Harry corrospondence (sp?) in the end. We can't forget about him can we? Hm...Petunia guilty...odd...but interesting. I love this story and is on my favorites. Update soon! Oh, and I like how you do the character Sirius.
Oh no its over! Sorry but i only found this Magnifigent story now and just read eleven chapters one after the other and had this idea that it wouldnt end. but I love it. In chapter 1 ....or 2 I dont kno one of them made me cry when Remus was all James this James that. And he sort of felt like pused asuied and it was something i relized when i read the 5th book and your the first author whos story really accnolaged that fact. Anyway i give u a million stars update soon and thanx for two and a half hours of entertainment.
Love the Harry-Remus thing at the end! Keep it up!