Reviews For James' Pain
Reviewer: wsc12b
Date: 11/12/06 16:04
Chapter: Betrayal

I'm sorry you can't continuing writing, but I thought I should let you know you are really good.

Reviewer: muggleharrison
Date: 06/21/06 12:07
Chapter: Betrayal

omg!!! this is the best story that has ever been written( don't know if I spelled that right)! but any way I love your story!!!! I hope that you will write some more chapters!!! lot of love for the story!!! and lots of friendship for you!!!

Reviewer: stickm
Date: 04/25/06 15:07
Chapter: The Spark

I'm quite confused because I'm sure I reviewd this ages ago but I can't find myself on the list... Anyhow great chapter, love the extra cheese!

Reviewer: lily_n_jms r mnt 4 eachoter
Date: 02/20/06 17:10
Chapter: Betrayal

omgodric Griffendor!! I hate peter! uhhh!!! *makes weird squinty face* I realy hope you update soon, cause It's been a while sence the last update, so I hope ur not like canceling the story. Well great story thou. I reely like it! :)

Reviewer: rita_skeeter
Date: 10/21/05 19:16
Chapter: Betrayal

Evil Peter!!! Arghh! Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next, though I am a bit apprehensive about Peter's plan... 10/10, please update soon!

Reviewer: Little_hoole3333
Date: 10/17/05 22:14
Chapter: Betrayal

Oooooooh! :) :O :P

Reviewer: Phantom_of_the_Opera
Date: 10/09/05 8:40
Chapter: Betrayal

Excellent Chapter... I felt like that was a really mean cliffhanger! AHHH... No fair... Great story though... hurry up and update!!.. lol.. :P:P

Reviewer: Dawn Lionheart
Date: 10/09/05 7:53
Chapter: Betrayal

Peter!!!!! god how i hate you!!! anyway, i know you've only just put the chapter up but please update soon!!! I love this story!!

Reviewer: Butterbeer123
Date: 10/08/05 20:04
Chapter: Sriaper&Serotser

Wow! You are one talented writer! Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapters... that was one hell of a cliffhanger! (Sorry didn't know how else to put it.) You put everything together perfectly. I can't wait to find out who the man from the bar was (s/he is obviously involved with Voldemort). Hmmm.... The whole Peter thing is wicked! He is just how I expected him to be! This is such a great story! It is on my favorites and I would give you a 10/10 anyday!!!!

Reviewer: lisa_lovegood
Date: 10/06/05 21:01
Chapter: Sriaper&Serotser

AHHHHHHHHHH wot a friggin clifhanger! lol gr8 story!

Reviewer: Phantom_of_the_Opera
Date: 10/06/05 13:49
Chapter: Sriaper&Serotser

Excellent Story! I really do love it, but the only problem I have is: I feel that you rushed things a little too much. As soon as you start reading the story you see that James and Lily are going out. There's not much information about their summers, the train ride to school, or lily and james fighting a lot in the beginning. It just feels too rushed for my liking. It is your story, and you should take your time with writing it. I feel that you should put more events into it. Maybe you can do that in your next fic! Other than that, excellent work! 8/10

Reviewer: Adalbert Waffling
Date: 10/06/05 13:25
Chapter: Sriaper&Serotser

Absolutely Fantastic! Like Hermione befriending Harry and Ron, it took a serious event to bring Lily and James together! The story is passionate, exciting, and moving; a true literary embodiment of love. The only think I found that I really didn't like was some of the dialogue, put it can be forgiven as no one really knows how to make them act, except for JKR herself. All in all, a great read!

Reviewer: Floatie
Date: 10/06/05 11:18
Chapter: Sriaper&Serotser

yeah when is the next ud i need it to survive!!!

Reviewer: sillysoraya
Date: 10/05/05 15:03
Chapter: Sriaper&Serotser

Brill story! When's the next update???

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 10/04/05 14:49
Chapter: A new beginning

This is quite good stuff. I think it progresses a bit fast for a first chapter and gives over the impression of being slightly rushed, but then again it is very enjoyable and I do want to read on, so thats probably a good thing. Well Done.

Reviewer: Dawn Lionheart
Date: 10/04/05 2:24
Chapter: Sriaper&Serotser

I luv it! please update soon!

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley 12
Date: 10/03/05 18:25
Chapter: Sriaper&Serotser

Wonderful story so far! You wrote about Peter and the death eaters and it blended really well with the story. The whole story is wonderful, so don't change your writing style. Update soon!

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 10/03/05 12:44
Chapter: A new beginning

Awesome job! I can't wait until the next chapter is up!

Reviewer: eerinw
Date: 09/29/05 17:53
Chapter: Sriaper&Serotser

Great job! I really like the cliffhanger and I'm excited to find out what happens next! I think it's so sweet that Lils got James' broom fixed! Anyway, keep up the good work and please update soon! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Little_hoole3333
Date: 09/18/05 8:19
Chapter: Sriaper&Serotser

Are ya gonna update yet? :) :O :P

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