Reviews For Ultimatum
Reviewer: Tamika
Date: 11/10/04 2:58
Chapter: Ultimatum

Wow... this is the second fanfic I've read that has actually made me laugh out loud and scream in excitement. Your story is beautifully written, though I thought the mention of an alarm clock in a school where electricity doesn't work was a bit iffy. The only other mistake I saw was the spelling of Padfoot (you put an r instead of a t). I've added this to my favourites and I'm about to add you as well.

Reviewer: pluto
Date: 11/09/04 17:21
Chapter: Ultimatum

Very lovely, as usual. Have read it before, not sure if I reviewed. I'll be back at the Wolfstar soon! Love, rabidfangirl

Reviewer: ToujoursPur
Date: 11/09/04 15:57
Chapter: Ultimatum

Hi, I love this fic! It is the best Sirius/James fic I have ever read (Seriously) I love how you described how Sirius looks(Great detail=YUMMY) I added you to my fav authors and your wonderful story to my fav stories! You are an awsome author! I also love the letter that Siri gave Remus(*wipes tears from eyes*) You MUST continue. Pretty Please for a cupcake or two? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Love ToujoursPur~(Sarah to you though)

Author's Response: Er, I hope you meant Sirius/Remus...

Reviewer: Isis
Date: 11/09/04 15:25
Chapter: Ultimatum

Good Job! No spelling or grammar mistakes, no stylistic issues...great! Wonderfulyl written! Do countinue, I've never really read any Remus/Sirius fics, even though I do beleive that was the case. I rather liked your story though! *waits patiently for next chapter* *adds to favorites and rates "10"*

Reviewer: pirateprincess
Date: 11/08/04 20:22
Chapter: Ultimatum

This story made me laugh a lot. I think I've read it before, though, have you ever posted on LJ?

Reviewer: PotterGirl731
Date: 11/08/04 20:09
Chapter: Ultimatum

This was so cute!!! I totally loved it! I defnitely hope you'll think about continuing it...please???

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