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Reviews For Ultimatum

Name: DracosPunkGirl (Signed) · Date: 08/15/05 19:22 · For: Ultimatum
Wow. That was really awesome. =] Hee Hee. I think they make a cute match. Love the fic. Perfect 10!!

Name: CreeveySister (Signed) · Date: 08/09/05 23:21 · For: Ultimatum
One of the few fics I can read over and over again without it losing its charm! You're talented; it was very believable, which is one of the things I look for in a good fic! One of the best Remus/Sirius fics EVA! *gives you a juice box* 10! 11 if I had the chance!

Name: bluemoony (Signed) · Date: 08/08/05 2:20 · For: Ultimatum
A very good+funny story! especially love the list that Sirius wrote^^ and the note between Mr. Padfoot and Mr. Prongs during Professor Binns' lesson XDD this is really a great story! absolutely LOVE it!!!

Name: FJDS (Signed) · Date: 07/09/05 16:07 · For: Ultimatum
Just reread the story once again ... and noticed I haven't even reviewed yet. It's wonderful! Really enjoyed it, thanks!

Name: broomstick (Signed) · Date: 05/30/05 4:30 · For: Ultimatum
Oh I love this story, it's one of the best ever written. It's so natural and in character, it's just brilliant. Hmm, I wonder if there's any chance JKR could be persuaded to make it true!

Name: BlackClaude (Signed) · Date: 03/23/05 17:57 · For: Ultimatum
I absolutely LOVE this story! Everything about it is perfect. I love the humor and the emotions of the characters. I especially love Sirius's list of reasons to tell Moony, the exchange of notes between Sirius and James, the hug outside McGonagall's office, and the way Remus responded to the note. (Gee, did I just list your whole story?) I only noticed two typos: "She looked as though he was prepared for their arrival," I think the "he" should be "she." And "His eyes are not as sharp was mine," I think "was" should be "as." But aside from that, this was very well-written, very touching, and realistic. (Rare for slash!) Please keep it up; I've read all your stories and now I want more! :)

Author's Response: Ack, typos. Must fix. Actually, it's not rare for slash; I think you've been reading the wrong stuff.

Name: Sorceress (Signed) · Date: 02/24/05 0:55 · For: Ultimatum
as not a big fan of slash, this ship is starting to grow on me... well written!

Name: phaedra (Signed) · Date: 12/22/04 20:20 · For: Ultimatum
I can't tell you how much I love this story. I saw a couple of people raving about it on the boards, and thankfully I checked it out. This story is amazing, I love the jokes in here, hilarious. Excellent character portrayl (sp). This is on of my first SB/RL fanfics and I can safely say I am hooking. Amazing Story! And I'm just going to keep rambling on about it! Gorgeous!!!

Name: Lycanthropist (Signed) · Date: 12/21/04 0:56 · For: Ultimatum
Wow! Greaty exposition of characters and plot. I loved how Sirius gradually told Remus, through the letter and everything. This was well-crafted and well-written. Stories like this are few and far, especially in slash-verse! I loved Lupin's reaction, even though I thought it was a bit OOC. Otherwise, awesome!

Name: HeartSinger (Signed) · Date: 12/20/04 13:31 · For: Ultimatum
One of the better written stories on the Mugglenet site! I found your story through the "recommended stories" thread. I checked it out because the person who reviewed it there said that this was one of the more believable slash fictions he had seen, and I agree. One of the challenges facing pretty much any "slash" fan fiction writer (regardless of the writer's own gender and sexual orientation) is that most slash fanfiction almost inevitably must pair together characters who, in canon, either have been portrayed as heterosexual or whose sexual orientation has not been indicated but is left to be sort of assumed to be straight. (I say "almost inevitably" because in so many fiction universes, including HP, GLBT people aren't dealt with at all; and if they are, like in the Buffy the Vampire Slayer TV series, they're still in the minority because they're in the minority in the real world too.) So any slash fan fiction writer dealing with heterosexual (or presumed-to-be straight) canon characters has to find some convincing way to deal with the sexual orientation issue. One weakness that I've seen in most slash fiction is that many fanfic writers just don't bother to address this at all.

Name: Beci (Signed) · Date: 12/14/04 16:00 · For: Ultimatum
Excellent, excellent, excellent. Brill brill brill. *10*

Name: Little Loony (Signed) · Date: 12/14/04 10:40 · For: Ultimatum
This is one of the best R/S fics i've read and i've read alot of those. but everything you have done has been done well neither was too camp which i have encountered. But this was brilliant

Name: LavenderMoon (Signed) · Date: 12/10/04 16:11 · For: Ultimatum
Oh that was soooooo good! i loved it, i thought you did a perfect job in portraying sirius's and remus's characters!

Name: Mundungus (Signed) · Date: 11/23/04 20:35 · For: Ultimatum
This may be the best story I've read here. Very witty, clever, and sweet. I loved the lists. Write more! One question--how is it that young Tonks emulates Sirius by transforming into a black puppy, if only the Marauders know he's an Animagus?

Author's Response: Because for the purposes of this story, not only the Marauders know that Sirius is an animagus. :-D

Name: lunarolivian (Signed) · Date: 11/19/04 15:39 · For: Ultimatum
This was so good, I love how you made Sirius look so innocent while remus was reading the letter. It's one of the best S/L fics I've read so far.

Name: cespotter (Signed) · Date: 11/18/04 3:12 · For: Ultimatum
I have to say that this is one of the best remus/sirius stories that i have ever read!! I think that i read it like three times, its fantastic!!! You did their characters so well and love the idea and the way that sirius came out to remus and his respomce.. You have to write more stories

Name: lindarielle13 (Signed) · Date: 11/14/04 19:45 · For: Ultimatum
I absolutely love this story. I've read it before, on AL, but never reviewed it. The list thing was very amusing; it reminded me alot of middle school. The way you portrayed Sirius. with his crush but afraid to do anything, was wonderful. But actually, I think it's the not Remus/Sirius parts that make this story truly wonderful. The bit about Tonks turning into a black puppy was absolutely hilarious. And I like what you did with McGonagall, how she understands that sometimes rules need to be broken for important reasons. *rates a 10*

Name: RiotGirl (Signed) · Date: 11/14/04 17:58 · For: Ultimatum
I Love it! Never read a better story!It's awesome..continue i'll be waiting for da next parts!!!

Name: thefairyqueen (Signed) · Date: 11/13/04 14:08 · For: Ultimatum
This is fantastic! I've never read a lesbian/gay story before and I really didn't expect it to be like this! It really is sooo cute, sirius and remus, I never would have thought it! Bloody brilliant! The way you captured Sirius and all the other characters are spot on, exactly how jkr does it! Ure a genius! Rock on!

Name: mrs_depp (Signed) · Date: 11/11/04 16:31 · For: Ultimatum
omg they were so cute when they finally admitted thier feelings for each other... i love the comment about Remus's arse... Sirius was adorable, you captured the very essense of what it feels like to be a young boy with a huge crush... not that i know personally, but many of my guy friends have told me about it... keep writing, and ive added you to my favorite authors!!!! Lurve, Cassandra

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