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Name: JAL (Signed) · Date: 11/21/04 20:32 · For: New Perils in the Shadows
yeah it was good but i really want to know about harry and hermione!

Name: syustat (Signed) · Date: 11/20/04 22:07 · For: New Perils in the Shadows
ok...i liked this chapter...it lets us know what is coming before harry and the others know...i hope the next one gets back to the harry/hermione situation though...i can't wait!

Name: JAL (Signed) · Date: 11/20/04 14:26 · For: Undisclosed secrets
oh i love it! please continue!

Name: hermione83 (Signed) · Date: 11/15/04 20:58 · For: The Pain of Moving On
Very good keep updating it.

Name: Celie Potter (Signed) · Date: 11/14/04 6:52 · For: Undisclosed secrets
Congratulations, it's amazing. I'm loving it, update as soon as possible because i can't wait to know the rest

Name: lance the dragon master (Signed) · Date: 11/13/04 0:27 · For: Undisclosed secrets
awsome story man keep up the good work and you better finish it or i'm going to get mad.

Name: kime (Signed) · Date: 11/12/04 15:54 · For: Undisclosed secrets
Me again. Great chapter, but here are 2 minor mistakes/typos I found (so sorry; I'm too picky for my own good) "Hermione? I know this is completely off the subject, but I've been thinking a lot about this during my stay at the hospital. Why did you and Ron, er, broke up?" BROKE should be break and:in the part where you decribe Harry's study: "...all his books from Hogwarts, and many others he had collected from various areas of the house. In the middle of the room, facing the door, was a beautiful, skilfully" Skilfully should be Skillfully Can't wait for your next chapter

Name: kime (Signed) · Date: 11/11/04 15:04 · For: The Pain of Moving On
Very promising.....nice beginning. Keep up the great work.

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