Reviewer: JAL
Date: 11/21/04 20:32
Chapter: New Perils in the Shadows

yeah it was good but i really want to know about harry and hermione!

Reviewer: syustat
Date: 11/20/04 22:07
Chapter: New Perils in the Shadows

ok...i liked this chapter...it lets us know what is coming before harry and the others know...i hope the next one gets back to the harry/hermione situation though...i can't wait!

Reviewer: JAL
Date: 11/20/04 14:26
Chapter: Undisclosed secrets

oh i love it! please continue!

Reviewer: hermione83
Date: 11/15/04 20:58
Chapter: The Pain of Moving On

Very good keep updating it.

Reviewer: Celie Potter
Date: 11/14/04 6:52
Chapter: Undisclosed secrets

Congratulations, it's amazing. I'm loving it, update as soon as possible because i can't wait to know the rest

Reviewer: lance the dragon master
Date: 11/13/04 0:27
Chapter: Undisclosed secrets

awsome story man keep up the good work and you better finish it or i'm going to get mad.

Reviewer: kime
Date: 11/12/04 15:54
Chapter: Undisclosed secrets

Me again. Great chapter, but here are 2 minor mistakes/typos I found (so sorry; I'm too picky for my own good) "Hermione? I know this is completely off the subject, but I've been thinking a lot about this during my stay at the hospital. Why did you and Ron, er, broke up?" BROKE should be break and:in the part where you decribe Harry's study: "...all his books from Hogwarts, and many others he had collected from various areas of the house. In the middle of the room, facing the door, was a beautiful, skilfully" Skilfully should be Skillfully Can't wait for your next chapter

Reviewer: kime
Date: 11/11/04 15:04
Chapter: The Pain of Moving On

Very promising.....nice beginning. Keep up the great work.

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