yeah it was good but i really want to know about harry and hermione!
ok...i liked this chapter...it lets us know what is coming before harry and the others know...i hope the next one gets back to the harry/hermione situation though...i can't wait!
oh i love it! please continue!
Very good keep updating it.
Congratulations, it's amazing. I'm loving it, update as soon as possible because i can't wait to know the rest
awsome story man keep up the good work and you better finish it or i'm going to get mad.
Me again. Great chapter, but here are 2 minor mistakes/typos I found (so sorry; I'm too picky for my own good) "Hermione? I know this is completely off the subject, but I've been thinking a lot about this during my stay at the hospital. Why did you and Ron, er, broke up?" BROKE should be break and:in the part where you decribe Harry's study: "...all his books from Hogwarts, and many others he had collected from various areas of the house. In the middle of the room, facing the door, was a beautiful, skilfully" Skilfully should be Skillfully Can't wait for your next chapter
Very promising.....nice beginning. Keep up the great work.