Reviewer: The Alchemist
Date: 01/21/05 11:39
Chapter: Refuge in Godric's Hollow

I should have written reviews for the other chapters, but I couldn't stop reading until chapter 8. First off, WOW! You have a way of writing emotion that I could only dream about. The exchanges between Harry and Hermione were amazing, I felt that I was experiencing those feelings as were having them. Even the anger that Draco showed was very well written, kudos. But there still one thing you need to do, update quickly because I NEED more.

Reviewer: Ataraxia
Date: 01/18/05 20:56
Chapter: The Pain of Moving On

This is one of the best fanfics I'd ever read, and believe me, I'm a hard-done perfectionist, and very difficult to please. I love your use of words and that excellent plot of yours - you really know how to express the inner essence of the characters. All in all, well done!

Reviewer: grindelwald
Date: 01/18/05 15:15
Chapter: The Pain of Moving On

Man where are you...This is truly amazing...plzplzpzlpzlpzlzplzplzplzpzlzplzpzl UPdate ssoooon

Reviewer: JAL
Date: 01/15/05 14:59
Chapter: Refuge in Godric's Hollow

please update!

Reviewer: Mina
Date: 01/08/05 14:02
Chapter: Refuge in Godric's Hollow

Nice chapter! Poor Hermione! Haha Hermy, that's cute! I can't wait till Harry kicks Draco's ass. He really is the bad guy here. I always thought him as a pest but not this bad! This chapter was sweet at the end. Very nicely written, please continue soon!

Reviewer: lilynpotter
Date: 01/03/05 1:18
Chapter: Casualties of War

oh wow, that was exciting! update quickly.

Reviewer: dudette3993
Date: 12/30/04 20:20
Chapter: Casualties of War

Oh gosh, poor Harry... Anyway, update soon please!

Reviewer: Nina
Date: 12/29/04 22:12
Chapter: Casualties of War

This was great

Reviewer: Zerberus
Date: 12/28/04 14:31
Chapter: The Secret of Hermione's Heart

Oh my god. This story ist great. I don't know what happens with me while I'm reading it. The rating of 10 is not goot enough. I reccomend at least a 20 I can't wait for the next part

Reviewer: The Watcher
Date: 12/28/04 12:28
Chapter: The Secret of Hermione's Heart

Best chapter yet. I'll check portkey.org for updates as well. You can really develop a short story. I hope you have an interest in writing professionally.

Reviewer: Nina
Date: 12/27/04 23:38
Chapter: Dumbledore's proposal

Loved it!

Reviewer: dudette3993
Date: 12/22/04 0:10
Chapter: Dumbledore's proposal

That was really good, but like the other poster said I just wish that you'd update more often and not take like a month. Other than that this is a really great fic and I hope you continue soon!

Author's Response: I have the story laid out, and I intend to take it to the end! Just keep on reading!

Reviewer: lance the dragon master
Date: 12/21/04 14:59
Chapter: Dumbledore's proposal

um...................would you like um take less time making the chapters because you took like forever what was it like two months and it be much better if you didn't take that much time

Author's Response: Sorry about the delays, what can I say, I'm a perfectionnist! I just posted chapter 6 on www.portkey.org, since Mugglenet.com is shutting down for the holidays. Those are the two sites where I update the story. Portkey is often faster, because they don't moderate every chapter once you're registered as an author. Good reading! DS P.S. I will try to update faster, though!

Reviewer: beije
Date: 12/17/04 12:42
Chapter: Of Love and Wounded Pride

Really good story! Keep writing!

Reviewer: Accio
Date: 12/01/04 20:02
Chapter: The Pain of Moving On

well..........................it's something????????????????????????????????????????????????

Reviewer: Nina
Date: 12/01/04 19:13
Chapter: Of Love and Wounded Pride

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! THIS STORY IS SO GOOD

Reviewer: JPotter
Date: 11/27/04 15:47
Chapter: Of Love and Wounded Pride

Wow! This is a really good story! Please update soon! I even put you on my favorites!

Reviewer: Watermelon
Date: 11/24/04 17:19
Chapter: Of Love and Wounded Pride

Awww, poor Harry! This is a great story! Keep up the good work, I can't wait for your next chapter.

Reviewer: Nina
Date: 11/23/04 18:25
Chapter: Of Love and Wounded Pride

Loved it! I want more

Reviewer: JAL
Date: 11/23/04 17:41
Chapter: Of Love and Wounded Pride

Oh that was wonderful!

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