Reviewer: Sunny June
Date: 02/17/05 2:25
Chapter: Return to Hogwarts

Hmm, Winslow perhaps ? Or more like, Lucius in disguise ? I wouldn't put it past him to become a little boy again . . . he needs a mommy. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Ataraxia
Date: 02/16/05 14:57
Chapter: Return to Hogwarts

This is an excellent chapter! I loved the plot twists - absolutely engrossing. It's very artful of you to keep the quintessence of our beloved Trio, yet introducing new issues as well.

Reviewer: isskibum
Date: 02/16/05 13:42
Chapter: Return to Hogwarts

hey i like it!!! interesting with the kind of "star wars"y turn with Malfoy and his father. Please update soon!!

Reviewer: the_bartender713
Date: 02/15/05 14:50
Chapter: Return to Hogwarts

absolutely amazing. i must say that of all the fics I've read- you (by far) have captured the difficult antics of Dumbledore the best. When he speaks in your stories- it's absolutely perfect- the way he phrases things, the jokes and still sensitivity- it's pulchritude. Amazing, and I can't wait to read more. A job extremely well done. p.s. wonderful way to incorparate Harry's "teacher" persona. It's still the same old harry, and I find that wonderful.

Reviewer: syustat
Date: 02/15/05 9:55
Chapter: Return to Hogwarts

With each and every chapter, the tension builds, the characters develop and the plot moves along. That is more than I can say for vast amounts of other fics I have read. You do a miraculous job of capturing the emotions and thoughts of the characters. The detail you put into describing the Old Rule is magnificent. You have, no doubt, spent countless hours coming up with this "brand" (for lack of a better word) of magic and it shows in your writing. Out of all the HPFF sites I have been to, this is one of my favorite stories! Keep up the excellent work, I am very anxious to read more! Sean

Reviewer: Emma06
Date: 02/14/05 18:34
Chapter: Return to Hogwarts

Woo hoo! First review for the chapter! Must say very well written. This wasn't my favorite chapter, but still it was good. Great Job and I can't wait untill the next chapter!!!!Bravo!

Reviewer: Emma06
Date: 02/06/05 21:35
Chapter: The Dark Side of Harry Potter

Bravo, bravo! Next chapter please!

Reviewer: syustat
Date: 02/04/05 18:03
Chapter: The Dark Side of Harry Potter

I loved that chapter. I absolutely loved it. The way Harry is struggling with his dark side, the way Mayfoy was punished (I cringed when I read it, it was very graphic, but extremely well written,) the way Harry and Hermione are discovering their love foreach other...it was perfect! I can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: isskibum
Date: 02/04/05 15:37
Chapter: The Dark Side of Harry Potter

hey great new chapter! It would be great though if you put a little more romance in the next one

Reviewer: Ataraxia
Date: 02/04/05 4:31
Chapter: The Dark Side of Harry Potter

Another excellent chapter, although if I be honest, I seem to prefer some of the previous ones... It is always good to interrupt suspense with some comic relief, but I was expecting some action after what happened... (Apologises for being such a fussy reader) Ah well, could always wait for the next chapter, can't I?

Reviewer: Sunny June
Date: 02/01/05 15:07
Chapter: Refuge in Godric's Hollow

This is a very intense story . . . Maldemort is just riding on Voldemort's tail, his end will come. Great story, well done.

Reviewer: the_bartender713
Date: 01/30/05 18:17
Chapter: Refuge in Godric's Hollow

as a rule, I don't really follow the whole H/Hr ship, but honestly, you make me want it to happen. please update soon! I'm looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: Dana_Weasley
Date: 01/30/05 15:26
Chapter: The Pain of Moving On

Amazing! I totally love it. I couldn't stop reading until the 8th chapter. That's why I didn't review before. Please hurry!!! I can't wait to know what's gonna happen next...

Reviewer: isskibum
Date: 01/29/05 17:18
Chapter: Refuge in Godric's Hollow

oh i love this story!!! please update asap!!!

Reviewer: Emma06
Date: 01/28/05 22:05
Chapter: The Pain of Moving On

Oh my God that was GREAT!!! I couldn't stop reading! How did you ever come up with all these ideas?! Maldemort, very clever! It was great getting both views. While reading the real book I always thought Harry and Hermione will end up together. I think that you might just be foreshadowing things to come like Hemione's parent's death. None of my friends think that Harry and Hermione will end up together and it's AWESOME to read stories that view the same opinions. Bravo on a job well done! Can't wait for the next chapters!!!

Reviewer: youngwriter16
Date: 01/28/05 10:53
Chapter: Refuge in Godric's Hollow

I love this chapter write more ASAP

Reviewer: rwanner
Date: 01/26/05 16:29
Chapter: Refuge in Godric's Hollow

Nicely done so far. Good pacing and a proper amount of tension. Please keep up the good work.

Reviewer: ama sha_HP
Date: 01/26/05 16:05
Chapter: The Pain of Moving On

Where is the update? I need more!

Reviewer: syustat
Date: 01/26/05 13:31
Chapter: Refuge in Godric's Hollow

I am really enjoying this story. There is the perfect amount of tension and the battle scene was written very well. Please update soon. Sean

Reviewer: sunflower
Date: 01/22/05 4:15
Chapter: Refuge in Godric's Hollow

I like where this story is going. You write well. Please update soon!

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