Reviewer: katsters
Date: 12/31/05 9:09
Chapter: Draco's redemption

Keep updating! This is a good story, and I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next...

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 12/30/05 20:26
Chapter: Draco's redemption

Wow I just finished reading you'r whole story... and I just LOVE IT !!!! I love the plot and the whole Old Rule thing.... Please, please update soon..... I just can't wait to read what happens next... I hape that everything will turn out O.K.....10++++

Reviewer: ashka
Date: 12/04/05 5:14


Reviewer: ashka
Date: 11/15/05 11:31


Author's Response: Hello Ashka, It turns out I'm working actively on chapter 15, I should post it within 1-2 weeks!!

Reviewer: ashka
Date: 10/15/05 6:39

thanks. can you contact me as soon as its up? i love this story. its really well written.

Reviewer: ashka
Date: 10/11/05 13:54

UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: It's nice to see the interest for this story. My schedule has been swamped in the last month, so I've worked slowly and sporadically on this story. Please be patient, and the story will be updated!

Reviewer: maddie78
Date: 08/30/05 13:02

holy cow! it's such an intense story, I love it! I hope we don't have to wait TOO long for the next chapters...

Reviewer: ashka
Date: 08/27/05 9:12
Chapter: The Pain of Moving On

Absolutely, utterly and undeniably fantastic

Reviewer: iuli12
Date: 06/30/05 21:01
Chapter: The Very Essence of Courage

wow, i cant believe i'm the first to review!! anyway, SUPER chapter. i love the drama. i can't wait to read about what happens to malfoy!!!! plz, plz, plz, update ASAP. i really am dying here!!! 10+++++++++++++++++++

Reviewer: haile
Date: 06/26/05 18:57
Chapter: Fights, skirmishes, and all-out war

the best fanfic i've ever read. and iv read more than id like to admit. i gotta get a life. moving on great story. some of the scenes between h/hr r pretty corny for my taste but wut do i noe. update quickly plz i'll b checkin.

Reviewer: iuli12
Date: 06/22/05 22:36
Chapter: Fights, skirmishes, and all-out war

super story!!!! 10 ++++ i like how you incorporated romania seeing i'm from there. i can see you did a git of reasearch, at least, travel wise. i havent finished reading the whole story, sorry. i have to go, but i will tomorrow. again 10+++++ please update soon!!!

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 06/22/05 17:18
Chapter: The Pain of Moving On

very good! i find that i like this story because its all so NOT OOC. the one thing that bothers me is when people make the characters ooc, which u don't so excellent job, love the storie!

Reviewer: Shelle Luvs Harry
Date: 05/31/05 1:24
Chapter: The Pain of Moving On

A review for the first 12 chapters. It is fantastic!!! Loved it. I'm a sucker for romance and when it comes to Harry Potter the only girl fit for him is Hermione. Can't wait for more chapters!!!

Reviewer: maddie78
Date: 05/30/05 19:00
Chapter: Fights, skirmishes, and all-out war

whoa, that was one of the best chapters yet! I loved the press conference and news articles--they were really convincing! The only thing, though, is that I thought Avada kedavra doesn't leave any marks? That's what it says in the fourth book. Harry just has a scar b/c he survived the curse, however that happened. other than that, AWESOME JOB!!! LOVE the plot.

Reviewer: koobredaer
Date: 05/29/05 2:47
Chapter: Fights, skirmishes, and all-out war

isn't krum from bulgaria?

Author's Response: Yes!! You are right, of course, I have uncovered the only blunder I made early in the story. Somehow, Romania stuck in my head, and I never really checked -- being somehow convinced it was Romania. I was way too far into the story when I realized it, and was hoping it wouldn't be noticed!! But anyway, it changes nothing to the story, except a city and a river name. The rest wouldn't change, so I hope you can still enjoy the story! (Which, by the way, is coming to a dramatic conclusion very soon!)

Author's Response: Sorry, made a typo, the first sentence should have read "you have uncovered the only blunder" ...

Reviewer: Hagrid51
Date: 05/29/05 1:12
Chapter: Fights, skirmishes, and all-out war

Whoa... Harry and Hermione can use my hut all they want, but muggles at war? who saw that comin'?

Reviewer: Momof3
Date: 05/27/05 11:20
Chapter: Unforeseen and Unexpected

Great story! Paris ... so romantic. I think you've captured some of Harry's complexity and darkness very well and I like the way you've portrayed the romance. Keep it up, I want to read more!

Reviewer: Sunny June
Date: 05/09/05 12:20
Chapter: Unforeseen and Unexpected

Ah, so sweet indeed. . . A lovely little day . . . That Winslow kid really creeps me out - well written character for sure . . . Congratulations on the new baby! Good luck with him/her and the craziness that comes with it - take your time writing. :-)

Reviewer: ProfessorMeliflua
Date: 05/05/05 20:46
Chapter: Return to Hogwarts

Great story! The plot with Maldemort is really inventive and Harry being the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher is both realistic and compelling. You've put Harry in almost the same situation as Snape was in Philosopher's Stone and it'll be fascinating to see how that turns out. Great work!

Reviewer: grindelwald
Date: 03/27/05 10:43
Chapter: Return to Hogwarts much longer do we have to wait for the next chapter..plz update soooon...

Author's Response: MY APOLOGIES, to you and all the fans of this story, for the delay for the next chapter... BUT: my girlfriend and I just had a baby on March 6th, so I've been crushed for time since the end of February! HOWEVER: I'm back on track, and should pick up the pace in the weeks to come. I want to wrap up this story SOON, before the summer so I can prepare for Harry and HBP! Only a few chapters to go, so bear with me!

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