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Name: HPgurl4eva (Signed) · Date: 07/27/06 7:57 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
I thought that it was great that you did the story from Crookshanks' point of view, although I would have LOVED to have read about the dance!


Name: himkim (Signed) · Date: 07/26/06 5:52 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
hey nice story


Name: myth_of_beauty (Anonymous) · Date: 07/25/06 16:05 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
Absolutely wonderful! This is a very original idea. I think you have good potential, keep writing! I have to give this one 100/10!


Name: frenchiee (Signed) · Date: 06/05/06 16:56 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
I always felt that crookshanks deserved more recognition. if only ron and hermione would end up together for real. Great story


Name: bighdancer1126 (Signed) · Date: 05/14/06 17:57 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
very cute!!


Name: lily_evans34 (Signed) · Date: 04/28/06 15:25 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
Ah, I loved that! I was sure that my attention span would give in half way through, but it was very entertaining! I loved how Crookshanks felt protective of Hermione, and hated Ron. That basically sums up his character. I also loved how you made him want to scratch the people he doesn't like and what-not. Owning 2 cats myself, it was very realistic. Two little nitpicky grammar things:

“Crookshanks!” She whispered, startled.

You shouldn't capitalize the "she".

She is you GIRL

Do you mean "your" girl? That would make more sense.

Other than that, it was great! I loved it!

~ lily_evans34 aka mrs_tom_riddle


Name: MioneJGWeasley (Signed) · Date: 04/20/06 21:51 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
hahaha very cute.


Name: flo (Signed) · Date: 04/18/06 23:21 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
Well how cute, that's the first thing that came onto my mind after I read it!
I ABSOLUTELY ADORE CATS!!!


Name: flo (Signed) · Date: 04/18/06 23:21 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
Well how cute, that's the first thing that came onto my mind after I read it!
I ABSOLUTELY ADORE CATS!!!


Name: obsessedwithron (Signed) · Date: 04/16/06 20:27 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
This is so cute! I kinda wish that Crookshanks witnessed a little more fluff, though.


Name: rhr4ever (Signed) · Date: 04/13/06 19:15 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
that was great -really funny


Name: Auror81692 (Signed) · Date: 10/20/05 16:17 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
Great story. i only have one thing to crititize: It is not Crookshanks who will be the supreme ruler of the universe, but I will be. MWAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT STORY!!!!!!


Name: futureJKR (Signed) · Date: 03/29/05 21:58 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
i love this one! it's so creative and very cute! i couldn't stop laughing...my mom thought i was going nuts....gosh, i really hope you write more stories!


Name: iheartsirius (Signed) · Date: 01/19/05 14:36 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
Aww, this was soo cute. Crookshanks is awesome! I'll look for more of your works. And give you a 10.


Name: Miseryluvsu (Signed) · Date: 01/07/05 23:01 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
Lol i think that was the funniest story I've read so far it was really good.


Name: WhichGuyNow (Signed) · Date: 12/30/04 21:26 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
lol I was laughing like the whole time, I especially loved the comment about a certain red-head having more freckles than there are humans, hehe that one cracked me up for like 2 minutes straight (lol Im easily amused) smooches ~bri


Name: Hermioneclone12 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/04 14:35 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
supreme ruler of the universe...lol....go Chrookshanks!


Name: Aimless Hexes (Signed) · Date: 11/30/04 10:00 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
Wonderful perspective and very feline! :D


Name: Lycanthropist (Signed) · Date: 11/28/04 13:45 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
What a unique point of view for a story! Crookshanks personality is hilarious and refreshing and has attitude. I liked his arrogancy toward Ron, though I thought he could have been a bit nicer. His love for Hermione and the way he refers to her as "my girl" is just the way I think a cat thinks of their owner. How their owner knows all and is their world. And though I'm not a fan of Ron/Hermione, I thought the ending was perfect and very sweet. Great job!


Name: Padfootstars (Signed) · Date: 11/18/04 20:35 · For: The Only Chapter in this Story
I din't like it mich. Whats with the cat being so arrogant at Ron? It just shows how dumb he is.


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