Reviews For Squidbait Returns
Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 02/04/05 9:06
Chapter: Lesson Plans Forgotten

Very insightful! I love the character's inner thoughts. Sexy and funny too!

Author's Response: Thank you! Exactly the combination I was going for--if you can't laugh about sex, you'll probably have a miserable time of it, is what I say.

Reviewer: Orlaith
Date: 02/04/05 3:37
Chapter: Lesson Plans Forgotten

That was 'extremely statisfactory.' I was laughing throughout. You presented that scene so incredibly wel, I'd magine snape to be exactly like that. You are a Star Grainne, it was fabulous!

Author's Response: Cheers, Orlaith! Your comments always put a smile on my face. I think it is always a good idea to keep a sense of humor where sex is concerned (but you were laughing with Snape and not at him, right? He's very sensitive.)

Reviewer: RebeccaO
Date: 02/03/05 20:15
Chapter: Lesson Plans Forgotten

Wow, you actually made a very sexy scene - romantic as well. Enjoyed it immensely.

Author's Response: Thank you--very glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Orlaith
Date: 02/03/05 10:41
Chapter: What Is Required?

OOOhhh! Geronimo! I was trying very hard to keep a straight face. It's about time they both realise it all! Again, thank you Grainne, it was fantastic!

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 02/03/05 9:58
Chapter: What Is Required?

Ah, oooo, she put it all out there! Now that's brave! Can't wait to see what will transpire next.......

Reviewer: lucillaq
Date: 02/03/05 2:13
Chapter: What Is Required?

Oh, I can't stand the tension!!!! Can't wait for the update!! It had better be soon.

Reviewer: RebeccaO
Date: 02/02/05 21:23
Chapter: What Is Required?

Akh! The tenshion ees keeeling meeee!

Author's Response: Have you tried yoga? Just chapter should go into queue tomorrow. Cheers for reading!

Reviewer: AndraElizabeth
Date: 02/02/05 20:34
Chapter: What Is Required?

I love the story!! Who hasnt been a little in love with sanpe?? He is just so brooding.

Author's Response: Who indeed? (though there are rumours that some prefer Sirius or Lupin or even the boy wonder himself--shock!) Cheers for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MoonysMistress
Date: 02/02/05 20:13
Chapter: What Is Required?

Grainne, you've QUITE outdone yourself. The RoR was a stroke of genius, particularly the bed. Baha! And no, you left us with a cliffy, how could you?! Ah well. I like how you're keeping Snape distrustful and doubting, and how she's the relationship-initiator. Lovely, brilliant, keep it up! (No doubts that you will!)

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I know it is a bit evil, but Snape and Athene needed to catch their breaths and have a cuppa before their big SCENE. So glad you are still reading (and I notice your update is, well, updated, so yay! As soon as I am able I intend to catch up on reading on this site!)

Reviewer: RebeccaO
Date: 01/31/05 21:51
Chapter: Interference Necessary

Very Very enjoyable read. If i were to select a favorite part to add in my review i'd have to put the entire chapter. Thanks for updating so quickly also. i can't stand it when i have to wait weeks and weeks for an update (altho by reading the review below it seems that it's not really in the writers hands.) Anyway, it would be impossible to improve this chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you very very much, and yes, a big part of the credit goes to my moderator and all of those who run this site! Cheers!

Reviewer: lucillaq
Date: 01/31/05 21:49
Chapter: Arrivals and Breakfast

I don't want to sound grose but if i ever met Snape and he was as sexy as you make him....I'd be after him too. Can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: And I don't want to frighten you, but I think that you would find yourself waiting in a very long queue! Bizarre as it may seem, there are a lots of people out there who are drawn to the greasy the fabulous EllieK states in her author bio, "oh how we ladies love bad boys!" Cheers!

Reviewer: MoonysMistress
Date: 01/31/05 15:37
Chapter: Interference Necessary

"He tugged the ends of his mustache in anguish..." Ooh, I loved that line! And also "angsty-filled rages". Splendiferous, as usual! But hurry, I want the next chapter. *nudge nudge wink wink* I personally adore Dumbledore in this chapter, and poor Sevvy and Athene! Aw, the star-crossed lovers. Another 10! ( do you get your chapters accepted so fast? Mine has been in queue for 8 days now. :( ) Ahh, well, the difference is, your story ROCKS and mine is...well...meh. Continue, dahling!

Author's Response: Thank you for all of your kind words! [Regarding the updates, all I can say is that I think it depends on the moderators' individual (and very busy) schedules, and I have obviously been very fortunate thus far! However, I believe 4 days is the maximum wait listed, so if you are concerned that the delay might have something to do with your story content, you should contact your moderator. Best of luck!]

Reviewer: Orlaith
Date: 01/31/05 13:19
Chapter: Interference Necessary

the sexy witch. Er...make that sneaky witch. I cried at ths point, it was of course an fantastic example of humour that you do so well! I love it. Really, absolutely ace!

Author's Response: Cheers for this! It is so nice to know that the humor is appreciated.

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 01/31/05 11:47
Chapter: Interference Necessary

Absolutely hilarious! Amazing choice of words! Snape being so upset about missing lunch and "the small pleasure it afforded him".....classic. I'm ready for more!

Author's Response: Cheers for this review! Glad you are enjoying Snape & Athene's adventures (both under and above the table).

Reviewer: lucillaq
Date: 01/30/05 2:46
Chapter: Fireworks

More romantic stuff quickly!! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying!

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 01/29/05 10:15
Chapter: Fireworks

I'm giggling! I also liked the "Ginny's".

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 01/29/05 10:07
Chapter: Finishing What Was Started

I never knew Snape had it in him! Can't wait to see what's next!!!! Excellent job!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: RebeccaO
Date: 01/29/05 9:10
Chapter: Fireworks

Whew! Those last 2 chapters were steamy (fan fan fan herself...)

Reviewer: Orlaith
Date: 01/29/05 3:29
Chapter: Fireworks

Beautiful, things really are getting of the grounds aren't they? I'm gad you put fred and george and the fireworks in, they really made it a treat! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for being such a faithful reader/reviewer. Fred & George award you oodles of style points!

Reviewer: MoonysMistress
Date: 01/28/05 10:46
Chapter: Finishing What Was Started

*dies laughing* Oh, that made me laugh my head off. Poor Snape, he didn't even know what hit him. You are absolutely brilliant! Another 10 for you!

Author's Response: *has Lupin revive MM, picks MM's head up off floor, dusts it off & hands back to owner* Thank you for another kind (and hilarious) review! I though the man could do with some ball-busting, as it were. Glad you enjoyed.

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