Oh rain. I love it personally. It means I can get cozy and read a book... Let my imagination run, and it's music to my ears, and quite relaxing.
I loved how the rain was a metaphor for troubled times, and also the last paragraph, when the rain reflected her tears. It was such a great way to get into the head of Hermione. Not sure how this was really a romance... But it was sweet still the same! :)
That was wonderful. Short and sweet.
this was a short but really sweet story
So poignantly sweet...
It's really depressing... I'm going to start cutting my wrists now.
(Please write a sequel or a prequel, I like your writing!)
The first sentence is peaceful, but at the same time somewhat lonely, and it made me want to read more - write from the very beginning!
I also like the way how you narrate the story - you don't close in to the characters, nore stray too far away from them.
The rain theme fits the second war beautifully, and you can feel the coldness of the war just by reading this fic.
Severus's kindness made me smile - and I hope that everything will be alright for them during the war....
I loved this!! So sad.... I really like the way you write, I'm going to read more of your stories
all a bit...confusing. you should have alittle more of an exchange
Extremely beautiful and captivating. The descriptions were in depth and the flow was wonderful. The sentences just ran into the next. The mood was very suiting and I thoroughly enjoyed reading such an emotional fic. *10*
That was sweet. I agree that i want to see more of your writings.
I enjoyed this short tale... very subtle and nice :). I hope to read more stories from you.