Reviewer: BetaThenNormal
Date: 04/21/07 9:47
Chapter: 20 - Confrontations

oh poor neville
really good writing btw

Reviewer: BetaThenNormal
Date: 04/15/07 23:55
Chapter: 10 - Return to Hogwarts

so many people have really good songs and yours is one of the best i have no idea what im gonna do for mine

Reviewer: Smeagoldor
Date: 04/07/07 13:25
Chapter: 29 - The Flower in the Stable

I liked the bit about the law but Fleur! You could have had dementors, horntails, death eaters, voldemort and the muggle military sending in nukes after finding the wizarding world and i would accept it but this! I will read on though. Hey you've gotten the longest review i've ever written ot of me.

Reviewer: Satyafakeer
Date: 10/02/06 7:16
Chapter: 30 - Visual Realizations

Great story. I love the previous chapter. harry and Fleur? Well it is a bit surprising initially. But why not. let the guy have some fun. I do not feel this is going to last long but till then. and the power which harry has and voldy does not know ----love is great. I think this pairing for now is for a purpose. May be harry may learn magic which is taught in baux and not at hogwarts as fleur is a champion.I am surprised that she is assistant to hagrid and not teaching Defence againstDark arts.

Reviewer: Lincos Trix
Date: 08/19/06 2:53
Chapter: 11 - Adelaide Abendroth

Lol quite a few mistakes in the story so far, but puttin luna in 6th year just threw this story out the window..... oh well.... and btw Harry would come into his inheritence at the age of 17 not 18...

Reviewer: manasvi
Date: 06/04/06 14:49
Chapter: 29 - The Flower in the Stable

You are all awesome readers and I hope I haven’t peeved you too much! Enjoy whats coming!

this was what the author wrote and i am peeved...neville seems of more imp than harry and harry is chasing a young,keep it up

Reviewer: Oppungo
Date: 03/09/06 11:44
Chapter: 18 - The First of Two

Oh dear - another ball! This'll surely cause a few problems! Although this can be a bit cliche, and a bit out of character for Dumbledore to announce a ball for Halloween, when we’ve never seen this happen before, it was well written. I absolutely loved the tension between Ron and Hermione in this chapter, all the glances that passed and the obviousness that they’re both trying to deny! I also think that in this chapter you kept Hermione really well in character, with her being shocked at Harry and Ginny attacking Malfoy and Crabbe, and her taking her prefect duties seriously. Also with the observantness connected with it, I thought was well done. I wonder if the absence of Goyle will play a part later... Also, Ron’s reaction to Dean was well done, and not too over done. Nice chapter, keep it up!

Reviewer: rita_skeeter
Date: 02/04/06 15:58
Chapter: 6 - The OWL Post and The Plans Of Mrs. Weasley

Wow, a really good story that follows canon very well. I'm enjoying this a lot - I think you've captured JK's style in a brilliant way. I look forward to reading th rest of it. Great job - well done! 10/10

Reviewer: Adriana3591
Date: 09/19/05 9:44
Chapter: 1 - The Unexpected Visitors

The Romulus and Remus thing is smart. The two founders of Rome who were raised by a wolf. But I think you went through that chapter a bit too quickly, you didn't describe Harry's feelings correctly and everything that has been going on. Personally I think you should slow down a bit. But the plot was good.

Reviewer: RagingStorm71117
Date: 03/28/05 21:10
Chapter: 28 - The Unforseen Event

When you first had Goyle switched to Gryffindor, I was both surprised and impressed. But when you had everyone in Gryffindor either ignoring him or being outright cruel to him, I was really, really annoyed. The 'Noble, Valiant' House certainly was not living up to its name- which, sadly, is probably how things would go if a Slytherin was to switch into Gryffindor. Oh, how the barriers crumble... I'm glad they're finally smartening up a bit. Incredibly realistic portrayal of events, and excellent writing. Ten! ~*~LIZ

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 03/25/05 12:42
Chapter: 11 - Adelaide Abendroth

he he, i laughed outloud at the "Proffesor Snap". i no it was a typing mistake but it still made me laugh. i was wondering, when will there be more of dymbledore? and, shouldn't harry be good at occlumency because he mastered it last year or, at least he could block snape and reverse it, thus being able to see into his thoughts/ memories. as for the chapter, i really liked it, it was really well written and i always like it when you read about new characters. well done!

Reviewer: severus_fan
Date: 03/19/05 7:03
Chapter: 1 - The Unexpected Visitors

Hey i just finished reading all the chapter, did a collective reading as i am new to the site..well yes the almost thing between harry and ginny left me heart has the new law..its difficult to imagine hogwarts without hagrid!! But the encounter with fleur was funny as well as exiting..well written in all..when will we get the plesure of the next chapter..and may be a pleasent wave between h/g..hey how many chapters have u planned on in all..god i am so curious..hope i am not bothering ya!!

Reviewer: potterfan226
Date: 02/23/05 21:06
Chapter: 19 - The Snake in the Lion's Den

OMG! i was laughing so hard when i found out he switched houses! Awesonme job ^_^

Reviewer: starryeyes
Date: 02/10/05 22:52
Chapter: 30 - Visual Realizations

wow...i'm so surprised! this was the only fanfic worth reading, but i'll get over it. im glad you're writing your own story! you write so well! good luck with that! it makes me think of NaNoWriMo...its a challenge where you're supposed to write a novel in a month. anyway, i hope all's well with your job and again, good luck with your new story!

Author's Response: Thanks. You have no idea how much all of your words mean to me. I was devasted when I realized I wouldnt be able to finish the story, but all of you have been amazing. Know that one day if or when I make it as a writer myself, you readers will have truly been the ones to inspire me beyond my own limitations. Thanks.

Reviewer: team_chee
Date: 02/10/05 21:53
Chapter: 30 - Visual Realizations

dear goddess, thanks for writing such a great story. a lot of it was completely original and i liked it all. i'm sorry to hear about your job and all that, it sounds like a lot of stress and i hope you're making it out all right. yours was one of the first hp fanfics that i read and you helped form me into the frightful addict that i am today. good luck with your new story, new job and everything else! sincerely, me. (ps, if you could email me your plotline if you ever get a chance, i'd love to see what would've happened!)

Author's Response: Awww I will for sure and thank you so much for the encouraging words. I wasn't sure if anyone wanted me to do that, so I will come up with a little plot summary and send it to you. It wont be date specific, but the general ideas will be there. Thanks again for your encouraging words, and I wish you all the best with your fanfic addiction. ^_^

Reviewer: rooroo00
Date: 02/05/05 13:33
Chapter: 30 - Visual Realizations

Aww don't worry. Your new book is far more important. Hope it goes well!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: saurjusa
Date: 01/27/05 11:50
Chapter: 30 - Visual Realizations

As allways, I love your story, but I have to agree with the reviews below, I'm too, loosing the thread and I have to go back and revisit some chapters so that I can pick up when you post a new one. I hope everything is going well and that there isn't a catastrophy thats preventig you from posting. Please update soon... its been a long long long time *sighs* and people are starting to loose interest... keep them coming... Cheers Juan

Author's Response: Wow...I never thought I was going to have to write this review. I haven't been on here in such a while because I haven't really had the access to the net that I used to have, and I apoloogize for keeping so many readers in the dark. Here's my situation: I wrote my story during my spare time at work, and as such, I kept a huge timeline there that foretold everything that was going to happen. When I lost my job due to uncontrollable events, I asked a coworker to grab them for me, and althouth he said he did, I just recently found out that he left it behind, and that it was trashed when the landlord of the building put the building we were in back up for rent. I know you are all probably thinking that I can probably write all my fifty or so pages of straight plot notes over again, and I am sure I can, but I can't write now at this point in my life. Without a new job right away, I am forced to really stretch things to pay the bills, and not only that, but I have started trying to write my own story, which is going decently at the moment. Therefore, this amazing story, as much as it breas my heart to let so many readers down, is probably never going to be finished. But don't fret, readers...the sixth book by the goddess Rowling herself is coming soon, and there won't be a need for my story anyways. If any do have the interest to get a sum up of what was GOING to happen, I wouldn't mind at all if you sent me an email and told me so, nor would I mind givng it to you. I wish all of you the best and want to say THANK YOU for being so amazing, all of you,. because without my readers, I would have never realized that writing was what I wanted to do. Cheers....Stef

Reviewer: lukyduky14
Date: 01/24/05 19:51
Chapter: 30 - Visual Realizations

i love this story...even though i am a h/g shipper...i love your style of writing and really like where your going with this story...update soon!

Reviewer: rooroo00
Date: 01/23/05 11:55
Chapter: 30 - Visual Realizations

Cool chapter but i agree with team_chee, I keep forgetting what's happened.

Reviewer: team_chee
Date: 01/22/05 15:34
Chapter: 30 - Visual Realizations

hi! 10/10, your writing style really makes me forget that i'm reading anything at all and makes me just get lost inside the pictures in my head! but it's been a while, and i really can't remember much of what happened in your story, kinda losing interest =/, can't help it. bad thing! update soon por favor!!

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