Reviews For Pumpernickel
Reviewer: hpfanforlife
Date: 01/20/06 11:19
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

Your story is incredible! I like how it has its own spin on it, in comparison to every other L/J fic. You've got great dialogue, and overall, it's perfect! Keep up the great work =)

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/19/06 14:02
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

Your story is brilliant! I love how they got together, and then James got into a predicament taht ended it. Now we will see some cold shoulders and heated remarks. Great job! Update soon!

Reviewer: Hpfanofmarauders
Date: 01/13/06 18:38
Chapter: Hey Ev'rybody It's Time For A Meeting!

You have to update, this story is one of the best ever. 10/10.

Reviewer: fire_temper
Date: 01/13/06 8:34
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

C'MON!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!

Reviewer: fire_temper
Date: 01/07/06 11:44
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

love this story i'm recent member, and i only recenly read this story,i thought that i'd just review at the end and sve the trouble because otherwise i wouldnt have anything new to say.......lovethisstorylovethisstorylovethisstorylovethisstory...did i mention i love this story? update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 01/04/06 21:26
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

Btw, the ending of that chapter was just amazing. Lily answered perfectly. I was almost crying! Please, please, PLEASE update soon! —Tash

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 01/04/06 21:25
Chapter: Do A Little Dance

Oh, and I really loved the whole thing where the wands shot sparks! I think I'm gonna use that! But don't worry, I'll give you all the credit ;). Great job! —Tash

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 01/04/06 21:23
Chapter: Do A Little Dance

That is such a good chapter! I love how you leave us hanging so we can't resist following this story, lol. 10/10! —Tash

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 01/03/06 18:43
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

Hm...I don't know why my previous reviews haven't showed up! This is one of the best stories on MNFF! Please update soon! I'm dying. I check like, every spare second I have to see if you've updated lately! Love it, love it, love it, Jade

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 12/10/05 23:07
Chapter: God Save the Queen

Oh snap! Now I know why they're friends. That was the best chapter ever! It was so long, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait till the Ball! —Tash

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 12/10/05 22:50
Chapter: Nocturnal Ventures

I love your long chapters! Some authors write the shortest chapters, and it's really disappointing...you're going on my favorites list!!!!! Great, great job! —Tash

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 12/10/05 22:35
Chapter: Hey Ev'rybody It's Time For A Meeting!

Ooh! What's going to happen now?! This is a big change, Lily actually being friends with James! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Great job! Oh, and the one suggestion I had was to just try to get a little more defined paragraph separation. I found myself getting confused about who was talking. Other than that, I love it! 10/10!!!!!!! —Tash

Reviewer: apotterfan247
Date: 12/08/05 0:14
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

really great story. I hope that James can convince her that this is all just a misunderstanding. They are so good together.

Reviewer: Fairy princess
Date: 05/17/05 15:43
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

wow!! amazing story! one of the best I have read! honestly! please update soon!!!

Reviewer: blab87
Date: 03/27/05 15:56
Chapter: God Save the Queen

please keep writing it's really good i think that gwen should be a little more a part of the story, oh yeah, and maybe add in some malfoy/snape vs. james/lily stuff i loooooove it

Reviewer: blab87
Date: 03/27/05 15:56
Chapter: God Save the Queen

please keep writing it's really good i think that gwen should be a little more a part of the story, oh yeah, and maybe add in some malfoy/snape vs. james/lily stuff i loooooove it

Reviewer: hpgurl2121
Date: 03/13/05 10:51
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

uh oh. temper, temper, Lily. i feel so bad 4 James! Lightwood is such a-...i'm not even gonna say what i think of her. lol! update soon! P.S. this is in my favs!

Reviewer: Hermione_Clone7
Date: 02/06/05 19:14
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

oh no, lily's mad, bad things are going to happen now

Reviewer: meant2b
Date: 02/04/05 18:58
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

i luv this story! i hope they get together again! i'm impatiently waiting for you to update!

Reviewer: Siri_luver
Date: 02/04/05 13:34
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

i love your story!!! please update soon, it's so interesting to read! your story is so different! i always love the james and lily stories...*sighs*

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