Reviews For Pumpernickel
Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/04/08 12:11
Chapter: Matters of the Heart

lol!! great story!!! although james played chaser, not seeker.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/03/08 22:48
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

ouch! lily really can hold a grudge! i think a certian stag wll save the day though...

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/03/08 22:35
Chapter: Do A Little Dance

oh no!! wat happened?! good chapter though!!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/03/08 22:14
Chapter: God Save the Queen

lol great chapter!! great idea for a king and queen!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/03/08 21:57
Chapter: Nocturnal Ventures

great chapter!! i was laughing so hard when james tackled lily that my dad called me a "harry potter nerd". hmph! lol!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/03/08 21:41
Chapter: Hey Ev'rybody It's Time For A Meeting!

great first chapter!! i like how u put in how james, lily, sirius, and lupin met!

Reviewer: Milliebaby123
Date: 01/24/08 1:55
Chapter: Hey Ev'rybody It's Time For A Meeting!

wow, really cute + gud

Reviewer: Lily_Ginevra_Potter
Date: 08/17/07 7:45
Chapter: Matters of the Heart

cute i like it!

Reviewer: JamesandLily4ever
Date: 06/20/07 11:07
Chapter: Matters of the Heart

Great story!

Reviewer: Eclairs
Date: 05/08/07 10:53
Chapter: Matters of the Heart

The sory was amazing. It was really really really really really really really really really really.... good.

Reviewer: soccerprotostar
Date: 04/11/07 9:10
Chapter: Matters of the Heart

awesome, romantc, and funny A+

Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/09/06 21:03
Chapter: Matters of the Heart

lmao.hilarious and cute.i love it


Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/09/06 20:47
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

awww.i loved this chapter.this question might be stupid but is she mad that he wont say i love you to her?

x3333

Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/09/06 20:47
Chapter: Anger, Tears, and Plans: OH MY!

awww.i loved this chapter.this question might be stupid but is she mad that he wont say i love you to her?

x3333

Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/09/06 20:31
Chapter: Do A Little Dance

Remus, sitting up and glancing at his friends who were currently wrestling at the foot of his bed. When they didn’t comply, he merely kicked them off the bed. With a loud and resounding thud James and Sirius landed on the floor, knocking their heads together like a bunch of coconuts.

hilarious

Merry Christmas!”

“Leda, come over here so I can kill you,” Gwen grunted from her bed. She moaned when Leda spread her hangings and the sun shined in her face.

“Come on Gwen! Don’t be such a wet rag! It’s Christmas!” Leda sang. She began humming “Deck the Hall” as she jumped onto Lily’s bed, throwing her onto the floor. Leda danced around the dormitory, effectively waking everyone up with her horribly off-key singing. Alice shut her up by throwing a large pillow at her face. It didn’t stop her, though.

haha.hilarious.they are so alike

OMFG!!I KNOW WHAT HAPPEND!!SHE SEES JAMES KISSING ANOTHER GIRL

Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/09/06 20:00
Chapter: God Save the Queen

“So, where do you want us to dump these two pieces of sh—Professor McGonagall! Hello!” sang Sirius, covering up his soon-to-be ill use of language.


“Ha!” laughed Leda. She grinned evilly at Lily. “I nominate James Potter and Lily Evans!” There were many more assents for them than for Sirius and Leda until Sirius stood up and crowed, “Hell yes!”



LMAO. FRKIN LOVE SIRIUS.HES HILARIOUS!!!
LOVED THA CHAPTER

Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/09/06 19:36
Chapter: Nocturnal Ventures

"James, you're talking in your sleep! SHUT UP!" yelled Sirius.

"How can you be sleeping if you're underneath my comforter?" laughed James.

"Prongs, I'm standing right behind you." James turned around to find a very pissed off Sirius. Sirius lethally narrowed his eyes and chucked a pillow at James’s face.


loved it.hilarious.lmao.sirius was so frkin pissed off!!lmao.loved it!!!



Peter’s eyes widened in childish amusement. “Do you mean you--”

“No, you dolt! Wormtail, we would’ve heard that!” exclaimed Sirius.


HAHA AGAIN SIRIUS!!ARGHH YOU HAVE GOTTA FRKIN LVOE SERIOUS.I ADORE JAMES AND SIRIUS.THEYY'RE HILARIOUS

ISTILL CNT GET OVER HOW FRKIN MAD SIRIUS WAS=]]

X3333333

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 09/07/06 16:36
Chapter: Hey Ev'rybody It's Time For A Meeting!

eek!! cool! And..uh-oh, Jamesie-poos been found out!!

Reviewer: Sweetpal
Date: 07/29/06 0:39
Chapter: God Save the Queen

I enjoyed the endng in this chapter
can't wait for the next chapters.

Reviewer: Hpfanofmarauders
Date: 05/26/06 20:48
Chapter: Hey Ev'rybody It's Time For A Meeting!

TWO SEQUELS????? *SQUEE!!!*

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