Very nice work. I love a good Snapes story. Keep writing!!!
This is a great chapter
cool story dude!
10 points to your house!!! Well done!!!
interesting start... keep it up, coz I want to read! kidding!..i mean...please!!
I can tell this is going to be one of my favorite stories! Yep can't wait to see snapey fall in love... Please hurry with the next chapter~
It's a great start, very interesting, can't wait to read more. Keep posting.
its a good start, can't wait to read more
it was ok. it sorta restated stuff we already knew, but i'd like to see how it develops. it would be noce if you made the reader think a bit more. it needs more suspense.
It's interesting, I like how it's building, please post another soon!