Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/05/12 3:49
Chapter: Epilogue

Wow! I absolutely loved this, even of some parts were a bit fluffy (I think those were my favorite parts). :) I honestly hope I find a sequel to this... It was a grand adventure that I can't wait to read again!

~Nagini Riddle

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 07/30/06 22:27
Chapter: Chapter 17

I am glad you allowed Potter to see this side of Snape.

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 07/30/06 22:18
Chapter: Chapter 16

I found 1 very minor mistake. Tatot is spelled with a t not a c. Still loving this story.

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 07/30/06 22:04
Chapter: Chapter 14

I love the side of Snape you are showing, this is the character I always wanted him to be.

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 07/30/06 21:58
Chapter: Chapter 13

Still loving it.

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 07/30/06 21:17
Chapter: chapter 7

thankyou so much for introducing me to this story, it is wonderfull. You are a very talented writer.

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 07/30/06 21:00
Chapter: chapter 5

I LOVE IT!!!!!!

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 07/30/06 20:37
Chapter: Prologue

I am taking your advice, and I'm loving it already. ty for the email...feel free to keep in touch.

Reviewer: TXwitch
Date: 07/18/06 17:20
Chapter: Epilogue

WOW!!! That was so good. This is of course for the whole story. I couldn't stop reading!!

Reviewer: box
Date: 06/08/06 19:01
Chapter: Epilogue

Oh!! this was absolutely the BEST Snape/Oc fanfiction I've ever read!! I hope that there will be many more brilliant fanfics like this one!! I wish that you'll write many more good fanfics, if not for yourself then for the people who read and enjoy them... :)

Author's Response: Many thanks! Your enthusiasm really cheers me up and, believe me, I really need that at the moment. Don't forget to read my other fic: A Night to Forget.

Reviewer: Crazy Rat
Date: 05/22/06 15:48
Chapter: Epilogue

This is one of the first fan fics I've ever read and I loved it. (one of the reasons I got an account was to review)

Author's Response: Many thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it, and I must say that it's really an honour for me to be your first reading. I hope you'll like my other fic as well, it's called A Night To Forget.ù Love Alessandra

Reviewer: MissWolff
Date: 03/16/06 23:41
Chapter: Chapter 10

I enjoyed your use of language, and the way the story flowed. You brought the characters from one scene to another with ease. I would suggest going through and proof-reading it. I found several grammatical and spelling mistakes. For example: mysterious isn't misterious, and so on. Overall, good job! Thank you for the read!

Reviewer: TheDazzler93
Date: 03/13/06 13:49
Chapter: Epilogue

I went to the link that you gave me !!! It is so awsome !!! I love the illustrations for "the snake and the eagle". But i noticed that chapters 24, 25, and 26 didn't have any. Are you going to add them soon? If and when you do, please let me know. (I don't have to tell you my e-mail address because you already have it!!)

Author's Response: Hello! I have updated the illustrations of chapter 23 and added one to chapter 24. I have also written another story, it's called "Ephémère". As I'm still waiting for Mugglenet to approve my first chapter of "A Night to Forget", to read my other stories go to my site and follow the link. Love Alessandra

Reviewer: TheDazzler93
Date: 03/10/06 14:38
Chapter: Epilogue

NO it can't be over!!! I TOTALLY loved your story! I'm sad its over ,but at the same time , I'm glad you were able to finish it. Eccelent job!!! Are you gonna write any more stories??? If you do , please, let me know!!!

Reviewer: songbook99
Date: 03/08/06 17:12
Chapter: chapter 7

Snape washing his hair and wearing something other than his long black robes? Interesting, very interesting. But you seem to have pulled it off. Your portrayal of Snape has really intrigued me. He is one of my favorite characters, but it was always his nastiness that made me like him before. Here, you have me liking him for his ability to be a little less mean, except for when he cuts in on Draco's dance with Alexandra. Of course, my favorite part of your whole chapter has to be your descriptions of Snape and Alexandra getting ready for the ball. It just makes me laugh to picture Snape looking at himself in a mirror debating whether or not to tie his hair back - what a great image! I also really like the end of this chapter because it shows that Snape really does care about Alexandra and she about him. I always hoped that Snape would one day find someone to truly care for him as I think that each person deserves that. So, seeing that at the end of your chapter made me happy. There were a few spots I noticed where you had some misspellings that were probably typos. But aside from those minor errors, your writing was simply wonderful and it complements the story you're telling quite nicely.

Reviewer: On Angels Wings
Date: 03/03/06 17:11
Chapter: Epilogue

I don't want it to be over. I really don't, but it was a fantastic story, one which I've really taken to heart. I've always had a soft spot for Severus Snape and it seems you've written a story to which my opinions of him have conformed to. Cheers to you Alessandra. Sincerely, On Angels Wings

Reviewer: On Angels Wings
Date: 03/03/06 17:10
Chapter: Epilogue

I don't want it to be over. I really don't, but it was a fantastic story, one which I've really taken to heart. I've always had a soft spot for Severus Snape and it seems you've written a story to which my opinions of him have conformed to. Cheers to you Alessandra. Sincerely, On Angels Wings

Reviewer: sniffles for Snuffles
Date: 02/27/06 16:32
Chapter: Epilogue

yay! it's finished! I loved this story. Your portrayal of Snape was the best I've seen in a love story. Congratulations!

Reviewer: On Angels Wings
Date: 02/22/06 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 26

Okay...keep going now...the reall resolve is intensifying the suspense. Wonderful story you have created. Sincerely, On Angels Wings

Reviewer: On Angels Wings
Date: 02/16/06 22:22
Chapter: chapter 25

Oh my gosh....oh my gosh....You have created in my opinion, the PERFECT Severus Snape. This is a truly remarkable story. You've composed a mysterious character out of nothing but a shadow and a thought and gave him fiber, meaning, human feelings that no one else knew he had. This was incredible....UPDATE SOON!!!!! sincerely, On Angels Wings

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