Reviews For Promises
Reviewer: LupinLover
Date: 01/24/05 18:50
Chapter: Melted Mars Bars

I like this chapter a lot, all except the drugs part, but I will get over that. I adore Remus in every way. Too bad he likes Aime and not me, Marie Elisabeth Bennington. Please keep writing, I really would love to find out how Aime replies to Anna Lupins comment about being equal to boys and ambition. I definatly give this story a 1,000,000/10! Thank You!

Author's Response: Bloody hell that's a lot of zero's. Chapter 5 is still being written all i will say of it is that they get one step closer to being the marauders that we all know and love. I hope that you keep reading and enjoying it. (The drugs don't come into it in such a big way again. You don't have to worry about that.) Thank you for the good review.

Author's Response: Oh and i will see if i can work you in for a cameo if you like Marie Elisabeth Bennington. :)

Reviewer: weasleysqueen
Date: 01/24/05 17:59
Chapter: Melted Mars Bars

hey great story really enjoying it hope u get 5th chapter up soon..well done mate..10/10

Author's Response: Demanding aren't you? Chapter 5 is being written so hopefully i will get it posted soon.

Reviewer: Tangle
Date: 01/24/05 16:43
Chapter: Melted Mars Bars

*giggles* Muuuunchiiiiies!! Good job hon, mmm melted mars bars on toast, will have to try that one day for sure!! Awesome chapter!! *hugs*

Author's Response: Thank you darlin' i am glad that you are enjoying the story. Besos.

Reviewer: LupinLover
Date: 01/23/05 19:54
Chapter: They're all going on a summer holiday

I love Remus! So is it pernonced A-me? I love this story. Keep updating please! Thank you so much. : ) I rate this story a- highest number you can think of!

Author's Response: Thankyou. I am glad that your enjoying the story. I am working on chapter 5 hopefully i won't be too long in the making. and yes it is spelt Aime but pronounced A-ME (it's just a variation on the spelling of the name Amy)

Reviewer: weasleysqueen
Date: 01/22/05 13:06
Chapter: They're all going on a summer holiday

Yo Loony!!!! this chapter....brilliant story ...come on wheres the next chapter????......i want it now!!!!...and i know wanting never gets you newhere but i dont care!......i want it... give it ur people ....we want the next chapter!!!!...and we want it now!!....also i want my payment....i aint gonna give you another review untill you dont care wot you owe me three lots now with interest may i add.....thats alot.............of chocolate you owe lol....neway well done mate 10/10 keep up the good work!!!!....

Author's Response: Ta chicken. I apprecaite it. You'll get your damn chocolate. i'll see ya tonite anyways. Thanks for the good review and remember THERE IS SOMETHING ROTTEN IN THE STATE OF DENMARK!!

Reviewer: Arina
Date: 01/19/05 21:05
Chapter: They're all going on a summer holiday

lol Aime jinxed him- keep posting please, I'd like to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks for showing so much interest in this story i really appreciate it. I am glad your enjoying it. I have posted chapter 4 yesterday so with any luck it will be up soon.

Reviewer: Arina
Date: 01/19/05 8:51
Chapter: Chapter 1 It Starts

Good start, I really like this.

Author's Response: thank you Arina. I really apprcaite the feedback

Reviewer: weasleysqueen
Date: 01/15/05 12:53
Chapter: The bottom drops off.

Hey Little lonny...2nd chapter is great....started to enjoy it more as you get more in to the story ....cant wait to find out what happens....keep it too you later mate.....dont take to long writting the next chapter we all wanna know wot happens...and again i am gonna give u 10/10 cos its a brilliant story....( i am still waiting for the 1st payment!.....)

Author's Response: Sorry bout the loss of 1st payment you know how the british mail system works. Its not as reliable as an owl but hey we can't have everything. Thanks for the review doll i appreciate it. All i will say of the next chapter is that is all gets a little more angsty.

Author's Response: oh yeah. Next chapter should be submitted on monday so watch this space.

Reviewer: xanado
Date: 01/14/05 19:37
Chapter: Chapter 1 It Starts

Is it just me or is your fiction presented on the ‘romantic section screen.’ By this I mean; I type categories, then romantic fiction and there I am presented with a selection of subcategories, i.e. Harry/Hermione ships… Normally to see a fiction you must choose one of the subcategories. However, extraordinarily, your fiction is presented for reading under the subcategories selection screen. Why is this????… please let me know for I may dribble in wonder at any moment. ;-)

Author's Response: Unfortunately Xanado i don't know. I wish i could tell you how this little blip in the mugglenet fanfic sectioning occured but i am none the wiser. When i submitted the story i had plenty of litttle romances in the making in mind and didn't feel that it would be a good idea to catagorise under something say Sirius and other character, when Lily and James Remus and Aime and even peter get a little lovin'. So i just catagorised it as a love story. Hope that my rambling explaination has proved of some use. By the way i could send you a bib so that you don't dribble on yourself at my unintentional 'brilliance'. Thanks for the review. I hope that you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: Tangle
Date: 01/14/05 10:45
Chapter: The bottom drops off.

GREAT CHAPTER! Love this story! Cant wait to read more, keep it up hon -hugs-

Author's Response: muchas gracias. Thanks for the good review Tangle. I really appreciate the input. Besos.

Reviewer: Neaaman
Date: 01/12/05 14:44
Chapter: Chapter 1 It Starts

Very enjoyable beginning! However, I would suggest proof-reading your chapter a little more next time, as there are some grammatical mistakes. The mistakes, of course, do not take anything away from the story, though. Good job!

Author's Response: Thankyou. I'll take your advice under my wing and make sure that there aren't as many errors in the next chapter. I will post it as soon as humanly possible.

Reviewer: mel
Date: 01/12/05 10:57
Chapter: Chapter 1 It Starts

Nice one mate! Good job, keep it up!!! :)

Author's Response: Thankies.

Reviewer: Tangle
Date: 01/12/05 10:30
Chapter: Chapter 1 It Starts

Really good job, as ive already told you! Keep it up, cant wait to see the next chapter, you have Remus's character spot on, Well done hon!

Author's Response: Thanks. I really appreaciate it. I am working on the next chapter tonight so i will post as soon as possible.

Reviewer: weasleysqueen
Date: 01/12/05 8:58
Chapter: Chapter 1 It Starts

I really enjoyed reading this story....but i think the person who wrote this story is brilliant at writting stories anyway(but then again she is my best mate)....but when she gave me this story to read...i enjoyed it because it made me think about how lupin was treated as a kid and what did his parents do when they found out....also i like her idea how they met.....So i am gonna give her a 10/10...and also little Loony "i told you so i told you so" lol

Author's Response: why thankyou Weasleysqueen. I really apprecaite your kind review. Your payment is in the post

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