
Originally Posted by
BertieBottsBeans741
What are Severus Snape's bad qualities? Examples? Excuses?
Oh gosh. He's vicious, sarcastic, and psychologically tortures children — do I really need to provide examples for that?- He absolutely torments Neville. Yes, Neville is pants at Potions, but he doesn't need to be publically humiliated for it, or mocked and ridiculed to the degree he is, particularly by someone who is supposed to be teaching him.
- He mocked and publically ridiculed a 14-year-old Hermione about her teeth in a way that was not only entirely inappropriate and uncalled for, it was cruel and unsolicited
- He does show blatant favouritism to the Slytherins; it doesn't appear he ever AWARDS points to anyone (not even Slytherins), but when the Slytherins misbehave, he doesn't dock points from them
- He shows blatant and unwarranted dislike for Harry and treats him according to that blatant dislike. It is true that Snape loved Lily and Lily died and Snape could be blamed for it, and it is true that Harry looks just like James and James was a complete monster to Snape, and it is true that Lily died trying to save Harry, but none of those are Harry's fault. No, Harry didn't help matters by his own behaviour, but Snape is the (theoretical) adult in this scenario, and he's behaving like a spoilt seven-year-old child who didn't get his way. Even if Snape had openly supported the Dark Lord through the first war and could show dislike for Harry for "defeating" the Dark Lord, it was inappropriate behaviour in a school setting.
All in all, he doesn't actually appear to like teaching, or at least not Harry's class, or maybe just not potions. I always had it in my head that he probably absolutely adored his 6th and 7th year classes, and his Huffepuff/Ravenclaw classes. 6th and 7th years have actually shown some aptitude and interest in the topic, as opposed to being there just because it's compulsory, the Hufflepuffs are hard working and likely to be very respectful, and the Ravenclaws are more apt to have, if not the innate ability that he posseses, then at least the academic interest that would make them apply themselves. With his biting attack on students, it's clear he's very impatient. I think part of Snape's problem was not so much that he LOOKED like James (which was a significant part of his problem), but that he didn't ACT anything like LILY. Lily seemed to have possessed the same innate ability in potions that Snape himself did, as well as an interest in applying herself to the subject; Harry seemed to possess none of Lily's ability or interest, (although to be fair, Harry possessed none of James' innate ability in Transfiguration, either). In any case, back to Snape; he's impatient, and I think this is demonstrated very well when he tried teaching Harry Occlumency; his instructions to Harry essentially consisted of "Just do it", and when Harry asked HOW, Snape didn't seem to be able to give Harry the step-by-step instructions he needed.
At least for Occlumency, that may be because "just do it" *is* sufficient instruction for Snape, and that he simply doesn't understand how to put it in words that Harry can comprehend. Harry & Snape have very different mental structures, not just in what they know and how and what they learn, but how they deal with what they learn and how they approach unknown situations. So it's not surprising that they are different in how they approach an esoteric, ephemeral kind of knowledge.
But Snape is also somewhat socially retarded and clearly misanthropic — he seems to hold everyone but Lily at arm's length at best. The other faculty have no problem addressing each other informally; Snape is always "Professor this" and "Headmaster that". There's a clear difference when he's talking to Bellatrix and Narcissa (and Tonks), but for Tonks & Bella, he was clearly taunting them, and I think it's fairly clear he was expected to be familiar with the Death Eaters and their families, and certainly the wife of Lucius, who is supposed to be a life-long, best friend. But even then, it can be said he was playing a part.
I think a lot of Snape's problems have to do with his upbringing. Some people shouldn't be parents and it appears that Tobias Snape and Eileen Prince are on this list. As much of an unimaginable jerk Snape was to everybody, at least part of that is the fact that his parents apparently not only didn't love each other, they didn't love love him either, and couldn't even be bothered to provide for his basic needs of food, shelter, clothing and bathing. The only reference Snape had for "normal" and for friendship and affection was Lily, and that largely seems one-sided. Lily does not seem to have valued their relationship the way Snape did until they were about fifteen — in the beginning he was her sole and first connection to the magical world and she needed him for that reason, and later, he was her connection to magic during the summer months while she was forced to spend time with her nasty sister. But by the time they were really established at Hogwarts, where she would have had her own friends to be visiting and the means and opportunity to visit them during the holidays (I.e. — her parents were likely to allow her to take the bus or whatever, to the closest location) she seems to have outgrown him, and he never did. And then, of course, he called her something completely unforgivable.
Which brings us to racism and genocide. We don't really know if Snape himself was really racist, largely, I think, because by the time we meet him he's an adult and he's either completely suppressed that part of himself, gotten over it or never felt that way in the first place. Yes, he joined the Death Eaters, and yes, he called Lily a Mudblood, but without making excuses for that behaviour, let's analyse it.
When Lily & Snape are first talking, Lily expresses some concern about her magical ability and asks him whether or not her heritage matters. Snape (entirely too early in his development to be having a full-blown crush on her, yet he seems to be doing so nonetheless) looks at her, pauses, and says no, it doesn't matter.
The issue here is, clearly Snape KNEW it did, at least to SOME PEOPLE. And there really isn't much good explanation given for why Eileen was so fascinated with the Dark Arts OR why she married a Muggle in the first place. I mean, her son's gotten it not him that Slytherin's the best house to be in and the Dark Arts are the way to go; how'd he get this from a woman who married a Muggle? I'm gonna go out on a limb here and presume he DIDN'T get it from TOBIAS.
But in any case, Snape knows it DOES matter, but only to some people. Rather, however, that worry his friend, he chooses to protect her and tell her that no, it doesn't matter.
I don't, personally, see his hesitation as him thinking it mattered to him. Because if nine or ten year old Severus was truly that bothered by a Muggle being a witch, he wouldn't have spoken to her in the first place.
Why, then, did he call Lily a Mudblood? Let's look at this situation here. Remember how much stress Harry, Ron & Hermione were under when they were taking their OWLS? We hear about it with Percy and the twins and the other students, too. Everyone's bordering on frantic. These tests directly determine what you're able to do with your life. For the Brits, it's like your A-Levels; for the Americans, this is like your SAT/ACT — but it's like that for every single class you've taken (with a maximum of twelve).
By this point, Severus has assuredly been harassed and harangued by his schoolmates and dormmates, who most certainly (judging by the fact most of them also joined the Death Eaters, out of their own volition, mind) WERE pureblood racists with an eye toward genocide. It's a sure bet that every time he walked in and had been seen with Lily, he had to defend his actions and use derogatory epithets to defend his behaviour, even if it was something like "that filthy Mudblood thinks I'm her friend, but I really just need her assistance on my Charms homework. I've assured her cooperation by helping her in Potions" or whatever.
He's just walked out of an exam. Even in the subject he supposedly dominated from before he got to school, he's not sufficiently convinced of his performance on that exam to relax and soak up the nice weather; he goes back and checks all of his answers. Then along come his four tormentors (one of whom apparently nearly killed him, and recently, one who sent him to that near-death and the one person in all the world he can't stand in the first place, who saved him), who publicly mock him, symbolically emasculate him by taking his wand, then they basically strip him and compound the humiliation by putting him at an angle where every single person in the school can see him, and THEY ALL LAUGH AT HIM. The only person to come to his rescue is a *girl*; the girl he's interested in, no less. She's one person in all the world he MOST doesn't ever want to see witnessing his humiliation and the one person in all the world he'd most want to impress, which he can't well do hanging upside down with his knickers on display for all the world to see. And with the entire school watching, you can bet his dorm mates were among them, compounding his crimes to them by having a girl, a Muggleborn, and a GRYFFINDOR, come to his rescue.
Does that excuse him calling her Mudblood? I don't think it does. Of all the people in the world, I would think Severus Snape, by that point inventor of Muffliato and the non-verbal Sectumsempra, ought to know that words (even the ones you don't speak) have power, and he absolutely shouldn't have said it, but I do question how tightly-held of a belief it really was for him, even at that point. And I would hope this analysis provides some very important context.
So if he wasn't a racist and didn't have a stomach for genocide, why would he join the Death Eaters in the first place?
I think it's very important to note that the one thing that Severus Snape seemed to lack most profoundly in his life up until he was a young adult was any modicum of control over his own destiny. He couldn't control his parents not loving him, couldn't control the environment he grew up in (poor and in an industrial Muggle are), couldn't control the fact that his parents didn't provide him with appropriate clothing or social skills, couldn't control that as a result he was a misfit and entirely too intelligent by half than his colleagues, couldn't control his appearance, couldn't control the taunting he received at the hands of the school pets/heros. I think the Death Eaters, and by extension, the Dark Lord, offered him control. Not necessarily power over another although that was likely offered as well, but power over HIMSELF, and power over his own life. They probably also offered him authority, respect, and position, and not a fair bit of money. No, money can't buy happiness but it sure pays the rent, and it appears that apart from the Death Eaters (and until his rather rapid employment at Hogwarts several years later), young Severus had no prospects for employment. Even wizards have to eat sometime, you know.

Originally Posted by
hpheart
He was afraid his double-life might be found out by Voldemort, and so was afraid for his life and if he died he might die before being able to tell Harry that he was protecting him. I think that shows he was afraid for his life.
I don't think being afraid of being tortured into insanity by Bellatrix the way the Longbottoms were and then ripped to pieces and eaten by Fenrir Greyback makes him a "coward". I simply think that makes him quite well aware of what monstrous crimes his brothers and sisters in arms are capable of. DUMBLEDORE didn't want to be tormented by Bellatrix so that he could be fed to Greyback, and i don't see you calling him a coward!

Originally Posted by
iloverupertgrint
And then become a spy for the opposition AFTER Lily had died? Wouldnt it have been logical to go to the other side as soon as he found out about the prophecy?
He did go to Dumbledore immediately after he found out that the Dark Lord was targeting the Potters. He didn't go after he found out about the prophecy, because he didn't know to whom the prophecy referred. But the minute he found out the Dark Lord was targeting Lily & family, he went straight to Dumbledore and swore he would "do anything".
BertieBotsBeans741, I disagree. I think he was doing it because he gave his word, and someone else (I know not who) said Severus Snape has a terrible, unyielding honor, and I think that's very, very true.
Holy smokes. I'm going to have to go back and review this thread because a bunch of other replies have come in since I started this post.
Okay, starting with Michelle's post:

Originally Posted by
The Marauding Cupcake
He could have easily let Malfoy kill Dumbledore, or fail as I suspect he would have. How many other would have had the courage to go through with what he did?
I would like it noted for the record here that he chose to do this, he agreed to do this, under the impression he would be IRREPARABLY DSETROYING HIS OWN SOUL, which he did not for his own gain or protection (as if he were making a Horcrux), but for DRACO'S.

Originally Posted by
The Marauding Cupcake
Even in the end, he gave Harry everything! He owed Harry nothing, and yet he let him have the information he needed, wanted. All about his mother, about his destiny, about his life... Snape didn't have to do this. He could have slipped away without Harry ever knowing any of it. He did it for her, not himself.
But bear in mind too, he also knew that unless Harry was armed with that information, Harry wasn't going to succeed, making not only Lily's sacrifice void in the end, and not only plummeting the Wizarding world into sure destruction, but also making Snape's acts over the last 20 years a waste of his time.

Originally Posted by
hpheart
Yes it broke his heart, but did that stop him being mean to Harry? No.
True, but I've seen some Slytherin (house) apologists make a reasonably good argument for Snape's behaviour. I think it is unreasonable to believe that Snape truly felt like the Dark Lord was gone. Granted, he seemed to be convinced in the first hour or so, just like the entire rest of the Wizarding world did, but I think that as time went on, Snape would have figured out that the Dark Lord was coming back. Therefore, he also knew that he was going to HAVE to be in a position to justify his behaviour, later.
Further, there is absolutely no denying that there is prejudice against the Slytherins in the books. Snape feeding the rest of them a bit of their own medicine is probably not all that unwarranted, although I grant he could have been a little less nasty about it (but for that, see the preceding sentence).

Originally Posted by
MissyQuill
Harry may have been James son but he was Lily's too. In fact, he was Lily's most prized posession so how would Sev ever hate him?
Because Snape wanted Lily to love HIM like that (or anyone, really, but especially Lily).
I simply don't think Snape liked Harry. I think he detested him.

Originally Posted by
Elmindreda
(I)t is no wonder that Severus' generally logical and reasonable mind tends to go out the window when it comes to Harry.
Yes, but the one thing we consistently see making Snape's logical mind go out the window is his emotions, whatever they are. Whether it be being tormented by James, irritated with Harry, or shunned by Lily, this character who fights SO HARD to have control over his own emotions becomes nearly incandescent with rage at times. I think that gets back to the control issue I mentioned; Snape has had so little of that in his life it's like it's the one thing he CAN control is his emotions, and sometimes, he can't even control that.

Originally Posted by
Elmindreda
I can bet you ANYTHING that Snape thought exactly like that (except less politely) every single time that Harry managed to masterfully get himself in trouble.
Absolutely. Further, Harry seems to show a general disregard of Lily in general. He idolises James, but he really seems to take Lily for granted. You'd think he, of all people, would note that it's not Harry being the Boy-Who-Lived who "saved" the Wizarding world, it's Lily who *sacrificed herself* that did it. And for all that, Harry seems to show remarkably little interest in Lily.

Originally Posted by
hpheart
I have to disagree with that. He didn't turn out to be a shelfish coward. He turned out to be a bit of coward for not telling Harry about everything he found out in DH before and only having the guts to do it when he realised this was his last chance.
I abjectly protest. Snape couldn't have told Harry anything even if he'd wanted. Harry's pants at Occlumency, and Snape's life was on the line. And Harry's, by extension. And Snape knew all of that.

Originally Posted by
hpheart
Snape and Dumbledore could both theroretically project thoughts with Legimancy(sp?), so they could have had a whole convosation without anyone knowing. Therefore, Dumbledore could have told Snape to kill him, then run with Draco, thus fulfilling the Unbreakable Vow made earleir in the book.

Originally Posted by
Severus Snape
"Only Muggles talk of 'mind reading'. mind is not a book, to be opened at will and examined at leisure. Thoughts are not etched on the inside of skulls, to be perused by an invader. The mind is a complex and many-layered thing."
I don't think it works quite like that.

Originally Posted by
moonymaniac
Snape merely sentenced unknown persons who might have been adversaries to death by revealing the prophecy.
But he didn't sentence anyone to anything. He merely relayed a message. He didn't know what the Dark Lord intended to do with that information, other than protect himself, which need not NECESSARILY mean killing someone.

Originally Posted by
moonymaniac
Snape will (not) win a prize for Good Guy of the Year from me, at any rate.
Thank the gods for that! I think he'd be horrified if he did! *wink*