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    Hello- I know you said you weren't available for chaptered fics but I've just written two one-shots, and was wondering whether you could look at them. They are not related, but both of them refer to longer fics I've written- though it shouldn't matter if you haven't read them- I think they work in their own right, but I'd like to make sure.

    Penname:welshdevonddragon
    Story Title: Dark Was The Night
    Genre: Post-Hogwarts
    Ship: None. OCs/ OCs
    Rating: Six/ Seventh I think
    Warning: Sexual situations/ strong profanity
    Average word count per chapter: It's about 6000 words
    One-shot or Chaptered: One shot
    Track Changes or Color: Track Changes
    Reason you want a beta reader: Commas. General grammar help/ I've had problems with dependent clauses (it's in the first person and she does ramble a bit). Characterisation, given you've never met these characters before. Anything you think's wrong with it, then say- be as harsh as you want.

    Summary:
    Lucy Carter (an OC whose Draco's Squib sister, abandoned by the Malfoys and raised a Muggle until being reunited with them after the war) gets over Lee Jordan, sort of falls in love, becomes ill, and then, to everyone’s surprise, not least her own, gets married.
    And the other one...

    Story Title: Don't have one.
    Genre: Dark/ Angsty
    Ship: OCs
    Rating: Sixth/ seventh years
    Warning: Non-consensual sex/ sexual situations/ violence/ abuse
    Average word count per chapter: 1200 words about.
    One-shot or Chaptered: One-shot
    Track Changes or Color: Track changes
    Reason you want a beta reader: Same as above
    Summary: Don't really have one yet, but it's basically the story of Florence Delaine and her unhappy marriage to Edgar Parkinson. Doesn't really have a plot.

    Hope you might be available for one/ both of them.

    Alex x
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    Alex - Sorry it took me so long to respond. I'll go send you a PM now.

    kind of available

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    Fresca

    I thought I'd better ask officially:

    Aurors and Schoolgirls isn't on hiatus, not exactly but I'm looking to get a couple of Mysterious May Challence stories done. The deadline is tight but would you be interested in -


    User Name: Northumbrian
    Story: M.L.T.: Muggle Liaison Team?
    Genre: mystery
    Ships: None (other than my usual asides about Lavender’s convoluted love life).
    Rating and Warnings: 3rd-5th years, mild language
    Word Count: Expected to be 15000 words, about 5000 so far
    One Shot or Chaptered: Chaptered
    Expected Beta Time: Real soon, please the challenge deadline is looming.
    Permanent Y/N: Yes
    Summary: This is a prequel of sorts to my story M.I.T.: Muggle Interface Team. This story features Aurors Protheroe, Brown, Bones and Beadle (two canon characters and two OC’s and is being written (in haste) for the Mysterious May Challenge.
    He was John “Pen” Parker. He was 22 and recently engaged to Naomi Nolan (19) the mother of his son. He worked for Howard Building Contractors. He was one of twenty people in the building when he died. Was it murder? Who had motive and opportunity? Whose was the cigarette, and what happened to the ring?

    In the unlikely event that I actually finish this on time I will also be looking for a beta for:

    User Name: Northumbrian
    Story: M.I.T.: Haunted House – Dead
    Genre: mystery
    Ships: None (other than my usual asides about Lavender’s convoluted love life).
    Rating and Warnings: 3rd-5th years, mild language
    Word Count: Expected to be 12000 words, about 3000 so far
    One Shot or Chaptered: Chaptered
    Expected Beta Time: Real soon, please the challenge deadline is looming.
    Permanent Y/N: Yes
    Summary: This is a sequel M.I.T.: Muggle Interface Team. The story features Aurors Brown, Bones and Beadle (two canon characters and an OC and is being written (in haste) for the Mysterious May Challenge, extra credit. A reality TV show in a Haunted House goes badly wrong for one of the presenters…

    Canon all the way.

    Neil

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